MarioWiki:Featured articles/Unfeature/N2/Rawk Hawk

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Revision as of 13:02, November 8, 2016 by Yoshi the SSM (talk | contribs) (wrong information in the box. I corrected the information. Why? It doesn't have the 5-0 standard and it was once 4-1. I say that the time needs to start over for this.)
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Rawk Hawk

Rawk Hawk, a featured article, was nominated to be unfeatured at 23:55, 5 October 2016 (EDT). If the nomination does not pass by 03:55, 5 December 2016, it will be considered failed.

Remove featured article status

  1. Time Turner (talk) The intro paragraph is literally two sentences long. Both the Background and Powers and Abilities sections suffer the same issues of brevity, and the section covering TTYD covers far more than necessary while not being particularly well-written (beyond the tense issues, the article wrings as much fluff as it can out of every moment, which is to the article's detriment). Even if the writing was polished, there isn't much to be said about the character; there isn't enough content here to actually justify touting it as one of the wiki's best.
  2. Baby Luigi (talk) Per Time Turner
  3. Alex95 (talk) One time characters are certainly difficult to write a good article on, as there really isn't much to go off of. Unfortunately, Rawk's is one such article.
  4. 3D Player 2010 (talk) Per all
  5. Bazooka Mario (talk) By today's standards, this article will struggle to get featured. I think it's mainly hampered by paddy writing, but I'm still sort of open on the idea that short articles like this one can be featured.

Keep featured article status

  1. The RPG Gamer (talk) This article explains Rawk Hawk's traits perfectly and has a lot of information on him, no section of the article needs to be rewritten either so I don't see anything wrong in having it featured.

Removal of support/oppose votes

The RPG Gamer

  1. Time Turner (talk) The oppose vote only addresses the issue of poor writing, although it only claims that it doesn't need to be rewritten despite it not having changed this entire time. It does not address the issue of brevity and the issue of fluff.
  2. Bazooka Mario (talk) Vague at best vote.
  3. Shokora (talk) Per above.
  4. Baby Luigi (talk) per all

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