The 'Shroom:Issue 122/The 'Shroom Spotlight
Welcome to Spotlight! What we do here is look at some articles with improvement tags, and tell you how to make them better. You then have a month to do that. It can be challenging work, but I believe in you :)
Last month was a mix bag of results. 50% of our articles focuses were completed, thanks to Wildgoosespeeder (talk), TheFlameChomp (talk), and L151 (talk) Sadly, Beldam still needs a rewrite, and although some images wee added to Popple a couple more could do. Also, one of our focuses was deleted through a Talk Page Proposal. I would just like to reassure people, that this is perfectly fine. Spotlight is designed to highlight articles with issues, and not being good for the wiki is an issue.
Let's check out our new set of focuses for this month:
|It's not that tight a line for an article to be created, and not be created. We want this March of the Minis article to be on the "created" side of things.|
|Looks like all of the information for this article has been sucked into a black hole, or least shot out into space. Try and get some so we can have this article be more than one sentence.|
|As it's a small article, it only requires a small rewrite to remove some of the flowery writing.|
|It's only missing some Mario Party: Star Rush information, so it should be a simple fix. On a side note, some additional images for the article would go down a treat.|
|She's the voice actress of the beautiful Princess Peach, at least in Super Mario 64, but despite the princess having numerous images, Leslie does not. Let's change that.|
|Maybe that should be a Shy Fish, this article lacks images for almost all of its game appearances. Let's try and fix that up, shall we?|
Thanks for tuning in to the newest edition of The 'Shroom Spotlight! Be sure to turn up next month, where we'll be reviewing the progress on the above focuses. If you have any questions or suggestions about this month's set of article focuses, then please get in touch through the dedicated topic if you have a forum account. If not, then please contact Yoshi876 or Shokora on their wiki talk pages. You are also welcome to make suggestions on what you think we could focus on in our next edition. Good luck!
|The 'Shroom: Issue 122|
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