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===[[Clockwork Ruins Galaxy]]=== | ===[[Clockwork Ruins Galaxy]]=== | ||
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#{{User|Gamefreak75}} - I, along with others, worked very hard on this article. It is very well written and comes complete with plenty of pictures. | #{{User|Gamefreak75}} - I, along with others, worked very hard on this article. It is very well written and comes complete with plenty of pictures. | ||
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:Done. The article had a few imperatives, too many badly written sentences, and way too many pronoun disagreement. Fortunately, they are gone. {{User|LeftyGreenMario}} | :Done. The article had a few imperatives, too many badly written sentences, and way too many pronoun disagreement. Fortunately, they are gone. {{User|LeftyGreenMario}} | ||
::I don't really think you "fixed" pronoun agreement. Some people may think that the former pronoun-antecedent is correct. Plus, "he or she" is super rambly. I suggest you either revise it to make "player" to "players" or changing "player" to "Mario/Luigi, Mario or Luigi" so we don't get to this type of argument. {{User|BabyLuigiOnFire}} | ::I don't really think you "fixed" pronoun agreement. Some people may think that the former pronoun-antecedent is correct. Plus, "he or she" is super rambly. I suggest you either revise it to make "player" to "players" or changing "player" to "Mario/Luigi, Mario or Luigi" so we don't get to this type of argument. {{User|BabyLuigiOnFire}} | ||
Revision as of 10:00, May 17, 2018
Clockwork Ruins Galaxy
Support
- Gamefreak75 (talk) - I, along with others, worked very hard on this article. It is very well written and comes complete with plenty of pictures.
- Edofenrir (talk)
- Fuzzipede27 (talk)
- MrConcreteDonkey (talk)
- Toadwell (talk)
- Baby Mario Bloops (talk)
- New Super Mario (talk)
Oppose
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Comments
My only problem with the article is that some parts seem to be written in future tense (use the word "will"). It should all be in present tense. Fawfulfury65 (talk)
- Done. The article had a few imperatives, too many badly written sentences, and way too many pronoun disagreement. Fortunately, they are gone. LeftyGreenMario (talk)
- I don't really think you "fixed" pronoun agreement. Some people may think that the former pronoun-antecedent is correct. Plus, "he or she" is super rambly. I suggest you either revise it to make "player" to "players" or changing "player" to "Mario/Luigi, Mario or Luigi" so we don't get to this type of argument. BabyLuigiOnFire (talk)
