User talk:99.130.115.90

Capitalisation

Words that follow a comma are never capitalised, unless they're proper nouns (i.e. it should be "In Super Smash Bros. Brawl, when the player runs out of stock"). Also, please try to use periods/full stops whenever necessary, rather than combining everything into one, long sentence separated by commas, as that is improper grammar. Mario JC 23:58, 24 February 2019 (EST)

Also, refrain from using the word "you"; we write in third-person, so "the player" or the character's name must be used instead. Please also avoid using [square brackets] as substitutes for (parentheses). Mario JC 20:15, 25 February 2019 (EST)

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A number of other things:

• Please remember to italicise game titles (formatted as Super Mario Bros., not left as Super Mario Bros.), which is simply done by placing two apostrophes (not quotation marks) before and after the title (''Super Mario Bros.'').
• Adding to what I said above, this is incorrect:

"Up to twelve 1-Ups can be won, if Mario hits the ? Block with a Bowser card right away, no extra lives are awarded."

This is a run-on sentence, which should be avoided. In cases like this, you need to start a new sentence or use a conjunction.

"Up to twelve 1-Ups can be won. If Mario hits the ? Block with a Bowser card right away, no extra lives are awarded."

"Up to twelve 1-Ups can be won, and if Mario hits the ? Block with a Bowser card right away, no extra lives are awarded."

• Please read the article carefully before adding redundant information like this. It's also unnecessary to change the wording of the content in the article if the wording was fine before; by doing that, your edits were occasionally left with grammatical errors and confusing wording.

You're also still capitalising words after commas and writing in second-person. Please follow the advice provided; repeatedly ignoring talk page messages may lead to a block from editing. Mario JC 20:15, 26 February 2019 (EST)

You are still doing this. -- FanOfYoshi 12:31, 27 February 2019 (EST)

(IP's can't get reminders, so that's been removed.)

Along with this, there's no need to add what the kings have been turned into on the level pages. That information is already present on the Kings article. 12:35, 27 February 2019 (EST)

Edits

Not only are you ignoring the above, you didn't even check over or preview your edits here, which was riddled with syntax errors. Continue this and you will receive another block. Mario JC 22:12, March 16, 2019 (EDT)