MarioWiki:Featured articles/N1/Mario Party 6

Mario Party 6

Support

1. KS3 (talk) A very good article, with no mistakes, plenty of pictures, and what an FA should look like.
2. VCS777 (talk)

Oppose

1. Reversinator (talk) Let's see... Extremely small introduction, copied story, some bad grammar, missing punctuation, and short sections.
2. Tucayo (talk) - Copied story, trivia section overly long and at the same time puns section is incomplete.
3. Gamefreak75 (talk) - Board section needs expansion and per all. Unofortunately, I don't have the game, so I can't help this one out.
4. Fawfulfury65 (talk) per all.
5. Commander Code-8 (talk)We surely can't have a featured article that start's off with one sentance and gives us no information!
6. LeftyGreenMario (talk) The only real problem with this article are the pictures of the orbs and spaces!

Removal of Opposes

Commander Code-8

1. KS3 (talk) The article starts off with a lot of sentences, not just one.
2. LeftyGreenMario (talk) Three long sentences doesn't sound like one.
3. BabyLuigiOnFire (talk) I added more "sentances" so your reason is invalid.
4. Time Q (talk): Now there's a proper introduction.

Tucayo

1. KS3 (talk) BLOF replaced the story, and there are only 2 trivias.
2. LeftyGreenMario (talk) All the problems you mentioned are not present anymore.

Revesinator

1. KS3 (talk) The article starts with a lot of sentences, BLOF added them and replaced the story, and etc.

Comments

I attempted fixing everything you guys think needs fixing up. I think it's fine, but someone else needs to fix all my grammar errors, since it's hard to revise your own text. You can ask me what else needs to be added and I'll gladly add it in! BabyLuigiOnFire (talk)

LGM: There is no copied story, you mean. BabyLuigiOnFire (talk)

Tucayo: Where is the story copied from??? KS3 (talk)

It came from the instruction booklet, but I replaced it. BabyLuigiOnFire (talk)

KS3: Actually, their reasons are still valid. My text surely has bad grammar in it and the images are not consistent. BabyLuigiOnFire (talk)

And LGM is fixing them. KS3 (talk)

There's still bad grammar. Reversinator (talk)

I fixed some of the bad grammer; can someone please check for more??? Can someone complete the puns section, I am too lazy to do the rest... KS3 (talk)

I fixed a lot of the grammar errors. LeftyGreenMario (talk)