MarioWiki:Featured articles/N1/Clockwork Ruins Galaxy

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Clockwork Ruins Galaxy

"Clockwork Ruins Galaxy" was nominated for featured article status at 3:45 on October 25, 2010. If the nomination does not pass by Error: Invalid time., it will be considered failed.

"Clockwork Ruins Galaxy" has met FA status requirements at 17:05, 3 November 2010, and it will become a featured article at 12:05, 10 November 2010 if unopposed.

Support

  1. Gamefreak75 (talk) - I, along with others, worked very hard on this article. It is very well written and comes complete with plenty of pictures.
  2. Edofenrir (talk)
  3. Fuzzipede27 (talk)
  4. MrConcreteDonkey (talk)
  5. Toadwell (talk)
  6. Baby Mario Bloops (talk)

Oppose

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Comments

My only problem with the article is that some parts seem to be written in future tense (use the word "will"). It should all be in present tense. Fawfulfury65 (talk)

Done. The article had a few imperatives, too many badly written sentences, and way too many pronoun disagreement. Fortunately, they are gone. LeftyGreenMario (talk)
I don't really think you "fixed" pronoun agreement. Some people may think that the former pronoun-antecedent is correct. Plus, "he or she" is super rambly. I suggest you either revise it to make "player" to "players" or changing "player" to "Mario/Luigi, Mario or Luigi" so we don't get to this type of argument. BabyLuigiOnFire (talk)
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