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#{{User|Mario}} Past tense litters the history section. The writing is also subpar ("''who was determined to fight Mario for the wand as he knew the alternative would be Bowser loudly reprimanding him for failure''"). Some sections of the article needs more detail (Leaping Lizards from Nintendo Adventure Books). Physical appearance is muddled with pointless details (like the yellow tan skin and a green head part). The section needs only the relevant details and comparisons, and it should analyze the appearance and changes of Larry over time. The "Personality and traits" might need some rewriting, with way too much usage of "utilize", a bad word. There isn't much mention of how Larry is the youngest sibling, so maybe some exploration on that part!? There's an empty section in the gallery section. Finally, the page can do a bit about our latest installment in the ''Super Smash Bros.'' series? So yeah, the article has a few flaws (so it's NOT perfect as claimed here) that really keep it from being featured. | #{{User|Mario}} Past tense litters the history section. The writing is also subpar ("''who was determined to fight Mario for the wand as he knew the alternative would be Bowser loudly reprimanding him for failure''"). Some sections of the article needs more detail (Leaping Lizards from Nintendo Adventure Books). Physical appearance is muddled with pointless details (like the yellow tan skin and a green head part). The section needs only the relevant details and comparisons, and it should analyze the appearance and changes of Larry over time. The "Personality and traits" might need some rewriting, with way too much usage of "utilize", a bad word. There isn't much mention of how Larry is the youngest sibling, so maybe some exploration on that part!? There's an empty section in the gallery section. Finally, the page can do a bit about our latest installment in the ''Super Smash Bros.'' series? So yeah, the article has a few flaws (so it's NOT perfect as claimed here) that really keep it from being featured. | ||
{{User|Ninelevendo}} This article lacks images in the personality section, yet has too much in the history section. The Adventures of Super Mario Bros 3 section is also a bit of an eyesore. The gallery and NSLU sections are also basically empty. | #{{User|Ninelevendo}} This article lacks images in the personality section, yet has too much in the history section. The Adventures of Super Mario Bros 3 section is also a bit of an eyesore. The gallery and NSLU sections are also basically empty. | ||
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Revision as of 17:12, September 13, 2014
Larry Koopa
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- PrincessJojora (talk) It's perfect... There are no errors, and what is possibly wrong with this page? Nothing! This page is absolutely perfect! It's ABSOLUTELY PERFECT! No stubs! And he's a cool Koopaling! (Just like Iggy Koopa!)
- raidpirate52 (talk)
Oppose
- Mario (talk) Past tense litters the history section. The writing is also subpar ("who was determined to fight Mario for the wand as he knew the alternative would be Bowser loudly reprimanding him for failure"). Some sections of the article needs more detail (Leaping Lizards from Nintendo Adventure Books). Physical appearance is muddled with pointless details (like the yellow tan skin and a green head part). The section needs only the relevant details and comparisons, and it should analyze the appearance and changes of Larry over time. The "Personality and traits" might need some rewriting, with way too much usage of "utilize", a bad word. There isn't much mention of how Larry is the youngest sibling, so maybe some exploration on that part!? There's an empty section in the gallery section. Finally, the page can do a bit about our latest installment in the Super Smash Bros. series? So yeah, the article has a few flaws (so it's NOT perfect as claimed here) that really keep it from being featured.
- Ninelevendo (talk) This article lacks images in the personality section, yet has too much in the history section. The Adventures of Super Mario Bros 3 section is also a bit of an eyesore. The gallery and NSLU sections are also basically empty.
