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Ashley and Red

Support

1. Ashley and Red (talk)My artcile (and of Red) looks good. I didn't see any issues.

Oppose

1. Yoshi876 (talk) Per Glowsquid in the comments.
2. Pinkie Pie (talk) Per Yoshi876. Featured Articles MUST be at 9000 bytes to be featured. This article is at 8444 bytes. Please expand this, or else this won't be featured AT ALL.
3. Demonic KB (talk) Per all.
4. Glowsquid (talk) see comments.

Removal of Opposes

Pinkie Pie, and Demonic KB

1. Ashley and Red (talk)I did the requirements of you 3. And Glowsquid, the beggining of the article looks good in this way.

Comments

I am OK with your opposes....But, exceot the size, the article looks good to you all?Ashley and Red (talk)

The article has several obvious problems;

• The introduction is a single clunky block of text. While most of the information is relevant, stuff like Ashley's age and "backstory" is not material that needs to be mentioned in the intro and could be spun off in their own section or integrated in the rest of the article.
• The WW Touched section is extremely short, lacking several details about the stage's "storyline".
• The G&W section barely describes the Ashley minigame.
• Hokey writing in spots ("Red clearly survives whatever perils Ashley puts him under," lol, what?).

You can probably push the article over the minimum recommended 9.000 bytes by expanding the lacking sections --Glowsquid (talk) 19:37, 17 February 2014 (EST)

OK, I fixed these things except of:

• Beggining if the Article: Looks good in this way, and I don't kniw what put :P
• Game & Wario's section: I don't have Wii U, and never okayed the game.Ashley and Red (talk)

Anyone who played Game & Wario wanna help?Ashley and Red (talk)

What it looks now??Ashley and Red (talk)