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:D'oh, I meant present tense. >.< {{User|LeftyGreenMario}} | :D'oh, I meant present tense. >.< {{User|LeftyGreenMario}} | ||
Time Turner, what would you do if you thought the article is written like a walkthrough? I'm okay with the article being written as that. {{User|LeftyGreenMario}} | Time Turner, what would you do if you thought the article is written like a walkthrough? I'm okay with the article being written as that. {{User|LeftyGreenMario}} | ||
Trivia is a little long {{User|Megadardery}} | |||
Revision as of 09:57, July 2, 2013
Bianco Hills
Support
- SKmarioman (talk) Well written and organized, contains multiple high quality images, each individual mission is accurately described and each Blue Coin and even fruit locations are stated. On a side note it is also used as the example article for the Star and Shine Missions Collaboration.
- Mr. Game & Watch (talk)
- BoygeyMario (talk)
- Superluigirules (talk)
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- Time Turner (talk) There's quite a bit of problems with the tense, and it reads more like a walkthrough than an actual article. The parts that describe the camera's movements also seem rather odd.
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Comments
I have one problem: the future tense is used a lot in this article. It needs to be changed to past tense. LeftyGreenMario (talk)
- D'oh, I meant present tense. >.< LeftyGreenMario (talk)
Time Turner, what would you do if you thought the article is written like a walkthrough? I'm okay with the article being written as that. LeftyGreenMario (talk)
Trivia is a little long Megadardery (talk)
