User talk:SuperbowserX
That was good how you added a lot of info in your edit for the Count Bleck's Army article here, but you did some things wrong. Most importantly, the section said BACK story, not the entire game story (actually the first part was about Count Bleck's history, but the rest was the actual game's story). Also, you made too many red links (links that lead to pages that don't exist, like the "red links" I just typed) in your edit. Some of the ones you made were Florian Caverns (should be Floro Caverns), The Overwhere (should be The Overthere), and The Boys (What??), which you made into Mario Luigi. Finally, the most common mistake you made was your usage of the word "too" in certain sentences. Take this sentence you made for example:
"After Dimentio's failure too kill the heroes in chapter 3, Bleck told his minions that he had a special someone (referring too L) too asassinate them."
The "too" words in this sentence are supposed to be the word "to", like "to go", not "too go". The word "too" means "also", as well as "very", for example: "I want to go too (also)" and "You're too (very) good". And don't feel bad - everyone makes mistakes. You should check next time before you leave your edits in case you made any mistakes, and make sure not to add the wrong info in the wrong sections. Keep this in mind.
