MarioWiki:Featured articles/N3/Princess Peach

Princess Peach

Support

1. Ashley anEoTselkie (talk) :I think that this page is good writen,with detailed sections,the only bad thing is the Super Mario Kun section
2. Lord Grammaticus (talk)
3. Pinkie Pie (talk)
4. MarioYoshi2 (talk)
5. Randombob-omb4761 (talk)

Oppose

1. Mario (talk) Some parts of the history section is written in past tense, namely, the Paper Mario, Mario & Luigi. Paper Mario sections may also need some condensing because they have a huge paragraph. Super Princess Peach section needs better writing. Mario & Sonic at the London 2012 Olympic Games and Mario & Sonic at the Olympic Winter Games need expansion (it has a story mode, so there should be a brief summary of that). Her "skills" section is written as subjective ("Princess Peach is very graceful"). The Official profiles and statistics section need some reorganizing (Mario Kart is after Mario Party, yet Peach appeared in all Mario Kart games, and Mario Kart came before Mario Party). Although Peach bakes pretty good cakes (personal experience supports this) and I think she's pretty *romantic sigh*, I don't think her article is quite ready yet.

Comments

Yeah the Super Mario-Kun section definitely needs work. I'll find some time to add some info....and maybe get someone to read Japanese. Baby Luigi (talk)

Not putting these in the opposition because I'm not 100% sure if they're incomplete. But Mario Tennis Open may be lacking stats and Yoshi's Cookie could go into something about stats, but I'm not sure whether they're applicable in the game, same for Mario Excite Bike. Yoshi876 (talk)

Not sure about the others, but her Mario Tennis Open section isn't lacking statistical information as I don't believe that has any on Peach, but it's definitely lacking information about what type of character she is and some details about the Peach-related clothing in Mario Tennis Open. Seems worthwhile. Icemario11 (talk)

Added Mario Tennis Open info. Baby Luigi (talk)

Increased Mario Tennis Open info a little,Added her minor appearance in Mario Tennis GBC,and added Super Mario Kun Info.Pictures Of Super mario Kun are necessary???I have two,one of her old design in the comic,and one of her new design Ashley anEoTselkie (talk)

Yes, of course. Again I need to find time to do this. Baby Luigi (talk)

That is OK.I wish more info about her role.And I added her stats of Yoshi's,CookieAshley anEoTselkie (talk)

Oh, her role mirrors that with the games....with a Super Mario-Kun twist of course. Baby Luigi (talk)

I added image of Super Mario Kum cover.The only problem now is the M&LDream Team info.I don't know this game.The only thing that I know about it, is that is for 3DS,The user Agent Dave7 writed a script of the game,but now is deletedAshley anEoTselkie (talk)

I own and have beaten the game, so I could take care of the Dream Team section eventually. Icemario11 (talk)

Section has been expanded. All that remains is Super Mario-Kun and the quotes section, I believe. Icemario11 (talk)

I added some quotes.Poorly quotes,but all that i know Ashley anEoTselkie (talk)

Yeah, apparently there's a lack of quotes page for Peach. Kind of troublesome, but one could probably find some on the site if they look at list of quotes for games Peach was in. Icemario11 (talk)

@WhiteWolf, any article can be vandalized, and besides it's semi-protected so only logged in users can edit it. Yoshi876 (talk)

@WhiteWolf grammar is only a little problemAshley anEoTselkie (talk)

@Mario, do a favor.for me. Just fix the Order of Mario Party and Mario Jart please. The Super Princess Peach section I can improve. I own the game. And I didn't understand the "Cakes" part of your oppose XD Ashley anEoTselkie (talk)

He's the adult version of my bro; he loves Peach. Baby Luigi (talk) 13:34, 22 January 2014 (EST)

:3 wow. Anyone can swap the Paper Mario and Mario & Luigi section to the present tense?? I can't edit them. Ashley anEoTselkie (talk)

Well, if somebody doesn't beat me to it, sure. Mario (talk)

Thanks :) Good Luck with the Princess ;) Ashley anEoTselkie (talk)

Probably tomorrow, I'll be able to beef up those Olympic Games sections. Icemario (talk)