User talk:Kamehameha/yoa

I don't think this is up to the required standards. Jdrowlands (talk) 04:19, 16 August 2008 (EDT)

It is in desperate need of grammatical cleanup. — Stooben Rooben 04:33, 16 August 2008 (EDT)

And also the userpedia and fantendo links removed. This needs to be formal. Jdrowlands (talk) 02:48, 17 August 2008 (EDT)