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#{{User|DKPetey99}} I still see some past tense. I also see no Super Mario-Kun. Petey must've appeared in the Mario & Luigi: Partners in Time comic. At least one of them. Some grammar mistakes. For example: ''Petey Piranha appear as an unlockable captain in the Wii game Mario Strikers Charged Football.'' I know it's just one, but there is some more. Like this one: ''Petey is going to appear in Mario Party DS as the first person who needs help, but he is replaced by Wiggler, and his board, "Petey's Greenhouse", is replaced by Wiggler's Garden.'' And in some opening lines, it says ''In Mario Power Tennis, he appears as an unlockable character alongside Fly Guy, Paratroopa and Wiggler. He can be unlocked by beating the two Special Tournaments - Fire and Thunder - in Doubles. In this game, he appears once again as a power character; therefore, his shots travels faster than usual, but he is slower than most other characters. He is also the largest character in the game, giving him a very large reach, but opponents have an easier time hitting him.'' All it says is "He." Who is "he"?  Also, I think sections where it says, "Petey", should be changed to Petey Piranha because its his full name, not a nickname.
#{{User|DKPetey99}} I still see some past tense. I also see no Super Mario-Kun. Petey must've appeared in the Mario & Luigi: Partners in Time comic. At least one of them. Some grammar mistakes. For example: ''Petey Piranha appear as an unlockable captain in the Wii game Mario Strikers Charged Football.'' I know it's just one, but there is some more. Like this one: ''Petey is going to appear in Mario Party DS as the first person who needs help, but he is replaced by Wiggler, and his board, "Petey's Greenhouse", is replaced by Wiggler's Garden.'' And in some opening lines, it says ''In Mario Power Tennis, he appears as an unlockable character alongside Fly Guy, Paratroopa and Wiggler. He can be unlocked by beating the two Special Tournaments - Fire and Thunder - in Doubles. In this game, he appears once again as a power character; therefore, his shots travels faster than usual, but he is slower than most other characters. He is also the largest character in the game, giving him a very large reach, but opponents have an easier time hitting him.'' All it says is "He." Who is "he"?  Also, I think sections where it says, "Petey", should be changed to Petey Piranha because its his full name, not a nickname. To wrap up my vote, there are now two templates. NSMB section seems to be biased. Saying: "This can be more difficult", etc. Tense tag is put back on SMS section due to use of past tense.
#{{User|Superfiremario}} Per DKPetey99
#{{User|Superfiremario}} Per DKPetey99
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#{{User|Pokémon Trainer Mario}} Someone can just fix it.
#{{User|Pokémon Trainer Mario}} Someone can just fix it.

Revision as of 08:39, May 28, 2011

Petey Piranha

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  1. DKPetey99 (talk) I still see some past tense. I also see no Super Mario-Kun. Petey must've appeared in the Mario & Luigi: Partners in Time comic. At least one of them. Some grammar mistakes. For example: Petey Piranha appear as an unlockable captain in the Wii game Mario Strikers Charged Football. I know it's just one, but there is some more. Like this one: Petey is going to appear in Mario Party DS as the first person who needs help, but he is replaced by Wiggler, and his board, "Petey's Greenhouse", is replaced by Wiggler's Garden. And in some opening lines, it says In Mario Power Tennis, he appears as an unlockable character alongside Fly Guy, Paratroopa and Wiggler. He can be unlocked by beating the two Special Tournaments - Fire and Thunder - in Doubles. In this game, he appears once again as a power character; therefore, his shots travels faster than usual, but he is slower than most other characters. He is also the largest character in the game, giving him a very large reach, but opponents have an easier time hitting him. All it says is "He." Who is "he"? Also, I think sections where it says, "Petey", should be changed to Petey Piranha because its his full name, not a nickname. To wrap up my vote, there are now two templates. NSMB section seems to be biased. Saying: "This can be more difficult", etc. Tense tag is put back on SMS section due to use of past tense.
  2. Superfiremario (talk) Per DKPetey99

Keep Featured Article Status

  1. Pokémon Trainer Mario (talk) Someone can just fix it.
  2. LeftyGreenMario (talk) I fixed the tenses, so, no tense tag.
  3. Mario4Ever (talk) Per LGM.


Removal of Support/Oppose Votes

Pokémon Trainer Mario

  1. DKPetey99 (talk) No reason stated, must give a valid reason.

LeftyGreenMario

  1. DKPetey99 (talk) I know its very rare to see incorrect tense on this page anymore, but some of it is still written in the past tense. Just look at the first line in Super Mario Sunshine. And just because you took off the tense tag, doesn't mean it can stay featured. You must complete all of the tense errors before removing the tag.

Mario4Ever

  1. DKPetey99 (talk) "Perring" LGM. LGM's vote is pending removal.

Comments

I still see incorrect tense in some sections. I also would imagine Petey appeared in at least one of the Super Mario-Kun comics due to the amount of games he has been in and how each comic is based on the game. DKPetey99 15:35, 27 May 2011 (EDT)