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#{{User|BluePikminKong497}} It is in consistent tense now. | #{{User|BluePikminKong497}} It is in consistent tense now. | ||
#{{User|Fawfulfury65}} Tenses are fixed. | |||
'''Commander Code-8''' | '''Commander Code-8''' | ||
#{{User|BluePikminKong497}} Same as above. | #{{User|BluePikminKong497}} Same as above. | ||
#{{User|Fawfulfury65}} Read the article, not the comments. I'm pretty sure I fixed them all. | |||
''KS3'' | '''KS3''' | ||
#{{User|BluePikminKong497}} Same as above. | #{{User|BluePikminKong497}} Same as above. | ||
#{{User|Fawfulfury65}} Per myself. | |||
==== Comments ==== | ==== Comments ==== |
Revision as of 10:05, July 4, 2010
Bramble Scramble
Support
- BluePikminKong497 (talk) This article is of good length, no redlinks, to my knowledge there are no errors, many images, everything needed for an FA.
Oppose
- LeftyGreenMario (talk) Inconsistent tenses and other bad grammar ruin a perfectly fine article.
- Commander Code-8 (talk) As I have discovered in the comments, their a lots of tenses.
- KS3 (talk) per all.
Removal of Opposes
LeftyGreenMario
- BluePikminKong497 (talk) It is in consistent tense now.
- Fawfulfury65 (talk) Tenses are fixed.
Commander Code-8
- BluePikminKong497 (talk) Same as above.
- Fawfulfury65 (talk) Read the article, not the comments. I'm pretty sure I fixed them all.
KS3
- BluePikminKong497 (talk) Same as above.
- Fawfulfury65 (talk) Per myself.
Comments
Just shorten the paragraphs a little bit. LeftyGreenMario (talk)
Oh... this wasn't ready to become a FA... Fawfulfury65 (talk)
LeftyGreenMario:I was trying to find some grammar errors but I coudn't. Could you just point one out for me? Commander Code-8 (talk)
I don't know if there were any grammar errors either, but I'm sure there were tense errors. That was my fault, I wrote pretty much the whole article :p I don't have the ability to keep everything in present-tense. Fawfulfury65 (talk)
EDIT: I fixed all the errors I could find. I think the article is just about fine now, but I can't think of any way to shorten the paragraphs. I want the layout of the levels to be specific, so people know what obstacles and stuff are in the stage. Fawfulfury65 (talk)
There are a lot of future tenses in this article. It should be written in present tense. LeftyGreenMario (talk)
Didn't I fix them? It should be in present tense now. Fawfulfury65 (talk)