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Hello, I've noticed in [[Special:Contributions/35.137.237.0/16|your edits]] that they often lack commas - You should try to make use of commas to space your writing apart, otherwise it can be hard to read and understand what it's saying (they usually go after words like "Additionally, [...]" and phrases like "If X, Y", "After X, Y", and "In ''Mario Super Sluggers'', ..."). {{User:Mario jc/sig}} 02:20, October 8, 2022 (EDT) | Hello, I've noticed in [[Special:Contributions/35.137.237.0/16|your edits]] that they often lack commas - You should try to make use of commas to space your writing apart, otherwise it can be hard to read and understand what it's saying (they usually go after words like "Additionally, [...]" and phrases like "If X, Y", "After X, Y", and "In ''Mario Super Sluggers'', ..."). {{User:Mario jc/sig}} 02:20, October 8, 2022 (EDT) | ||
Again, remember to use a comma after sentence-starter adverbs like "Additionally". There should also be a comma before conjunctions like "but" and "though". {{User:Mario jc/sig}} 07:16, November 9, 2023 (EST) | |||
== Citations == | == Citations == |
Revision as of 08:16, November 9, 2023
Commas
Hello, I've noticed in your edits that they often lack commas - You should try to make use of commas to space your writing apart, otherwise it can be hard to read and understand what it's saying (they usually go after words like "Additionally, [...]" and phrases like "If X, Y", "After X, Y", and "In Mario Super Sluggers, ..."). Mario JC 02:20, October 8, 2022 (EDT)
Again, remember to use a comma after sentence-starter adverbs like "Additionally". There should also be a comma before conjunctions like "but" and "though". Mario JC 07:16, November 9, 2023 (EST)
Citations
Please make sure you cite your reference in the actual article rather than just the summary (see MarioWiki:Citations for how to do it). Mario JC 04:49, September 2, 2023 (EDT)
Than vs then
"Than" as in "more than" or "less than" is spelled with an "a", not "e". Mario JC 01:22, September 10, 2023 (EDT)
Recent inappropriate edit summaries
Please stop your derogatory edit summaries,[1] particularly involving your personal tirades about pronouns.[2]. It's me, Mario! (Talk / Stalk) 19:37, October 20, 2023 (EDT)
- Also regarding another inappropriate edit summary being made:[3] we will not encourage dirt digging on people's personal information. Please maintain your conduct in these edit summaries. It's me, Mario! (Talk / Stalk) 15:22, October 22, 2023 (EDT)
Trivia
Please check the rest of the article before adding trivia. The points you've been adding to the Mario Kart pages are already mentioned on the page (and do not need to be in trivia anyway).
Also, you're still just citing sources in summaries. You need to cite them on the article as I mentioned above. Mario JC 00:55, November 2, 2023 (EDT)