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Basically, the problem I have with this article is that sentences keep starting with a preposition phrase, which means that it's a passive tense. I'd do some more rewriting, but I'll note to ya that there are pretty noticeable punctuation errors in the article (such as placing a colon after a verb when making a list). {{User:BabyLuigiOnFire/sig}} 12:56, 28 April 2013 (EDT) | Basically, the problem I have with this article is that sentences keep starting with a preposition phrase, which means that it's a passive tense. I'd do some more rewriting, but I'll note to ya that there are pretty noticeable punctuation errors in the article (such as placing a colon after a verb when making a list). {{User:BabyLuigiOnFire/sig}} 12:56, 28 April 2013 (EDT) | ||
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I'll try to look into that, but it'll probably take me a while, I've been busy with finals. --{{User:Tucayo/sig}} 17:07, 29 April 2013 (EDT) | |||