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Excuse me for popping in, but I noticed your recent edits to [[Straight Luge]], and I just have a couple of comments: images do not need a |right tag, as they default to the right side, so it's best to leave them out and remove them from any future images you happen to come across; saying that something ''will'' do something is the future tense, and our [[MarioWiki:Manual of Style|Manual of Style]] isn't fond of that. {{User:Time Turner/sig}} | Excuse me for popping in, but I noticed your recent edits to [[Straight Luge]], and I just have a couple of comments: images do not need a |right tag, as they default to the right side, so it's best to leave them out and remove them from any future images you happen to come across; saying that something ''will'' do something is the future tense, and our [[MarioWiki:Manual of Style|Manual of Style]] isn't fond of that. {{User:Time Turner/sig}} | ||
:The problem with that sentence is that you use "will" twice: "The more it is charged, the farther he'''{{'}}ll''' travel, but the attack's power '''will''' not increase unless it's fully charged." Something more appropriate would be, "The more it is charged, the farther he travels, but its attack power does not increase unless it is fully charged." {{User:Time Turner/sig}} 10:33, 9 November 2015 (EST) | |||