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Anyway, if you'll egg-scuse me, I'm going to drop the egg puns for just a moment while I eggs-hibit my duties as a Spotlight co-manager and review our article focuses from last month. <small>Crack a pity laugh why don't you, it’s eggs-hausting forcing these horrible puns on such a hard-boiled audience.</small> | Anyway, if you'll egg-scuse me, I'm going to drop the egg puns for just a moment while I eggs-hibit my duties as a Spotlight co-manager and review our article focuses from last month. <small>Crack a pity laugh why don't you, it’s eggs-hausting forcing these horrible puns on such a hard-boiled audience.</small> | ||
Last month, we focused on articles relating to [[Donkey Kong]] to celebrate the release of ''[[Donkey Kong Country: Tropical Freeze]]''. Unfortunately, this was somewhat met with frigid reception <s>(kill me)</s>, aside from two cases. Our [[:Category:Rewrite | Last month, we focused on articles relating to [[Donkey Kong]] to celebrate the release of ''[[Donkey Kong Country: Tropical Freeze]]''. Unfortunately, this was somewhat met with frigid reception <s>(kill me)</s>, aside from two cases. Our [[:Category:Rewrite requested|rewrite]] focus, ''[[Donkey Kong Country Returns 3D]]'' received some cool alterations in the Differences and Additions section courtesy of {{user|SKmarioman}}, and towards the very end of the month, the rest of the article was rewritten thanks to {{user|Icemario}}! Also at the end of the month, our [[Special:WantedPages|Wanted pages]] article, [[Mt. Dynamite Remix]] was created by our other Spotlight co-manager {{User|Yoshi876}}, and it follows the standard of the other course articles very nicely! Lead by eggs-ample, I guess? <small>(That was the only one, I swear)</small>. Our [[:Category:Rewrite and Expansion Requested|rewrite-expand]] <s>dong</s> focus, [[Banana]] also received some minor input, but the rest of our focuses weren't so fortunate. | ||
On the bright side, two of our untouched [[The 'Shroom:Issue LXXXII/The 'Shroom Spotlight|January]] focuses have received contributions worth mentioning! It seems [[Hiroji Kiyotake|Mr. Kiyotake]] has received a somewhat better quality outfit thanks to {{user|Icemario}}, and [[Jarvis]] is finally at peace, as {{user|Dashbot}} has uploaded a suitable image for his infobox. Egg-ceptional! Once again, even if the deadline for an article or image we've focused on has passed, it's still worth going back and improving the article or image even further, because noteworthy contributions certainly won't go unnoticed! | On the bright side, two of our untouched [[The 'Shroom:Issue LXXXII/The 'Shroom Spotlight|January]] focuses have received contributions worth mentioning! It seems [[Hiroji Kiyotake|Mr. Kiyotake]] has received a somewhat better quality outfit thanks to {{user|Icemario}}, and [[Jarvis]] is finally at peace, as {{user|Dashbot}} has uploaded a suitable image for his infobox. Egg-ceptional! Once again, even if the deadline for an article or image we've focused on has passed, it's still worth going back and improving the article or image even further, because noteworthy contributions certainly won't go unnoticed! | ||
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*'''[[Magma Castle]]''' ([[:Category:Stubs|stub]]) – Magma Castle is the final level of ''[[Yoshi's Story]]''. Unfortunately the magma has burned away much of the information and so it's a stub. Brave the magma and bring it to an acceptable length. | *'''[[Magma Castle]]''' ([[:Category:Stubs|stub]]) – Magma Castle is the final level of ''[[Yoshi's Story]]''. Unfortunately the magma has burned away much of the information and so it's a stub. Brave the magma and bring it to an acceptable length. | ||
*'''[[Yoshi]]''' ([[:Category:Rewrite | *'''[[Yoshi]]''' ([[:Category:Rewrite requested|rewrite]]) – Here at 'Shroom Spotlight we don't like focusing on obscure articles. However, we're willing to make an exception to this one so the heavy bias and flowery writing can be removed. | ||
*'''[[Yoshi's Island (place)]]''' ([[:Category:Rewrite and Expansion Requested|rewrite-expand]]) – The home island of the Yoshis is lacking a lot of information, most notably in the Itadaki Street section. | *'''[[Yoshi's Island (place)]]''' ([[:Category:Rewrite and Expansion Requested|rewrite-expand]]) – The home island of the Yoshis is lacking a lot of information, most notably in the Itadaki Street section. | ||
*'''[[Yoshi's Cookie]]''' ([[:Category:Articles with long trivia sections|trivia]]) – I'd love a cookie, unfortunately the trivia section on this one makes it hard to digest. Trim parts off to make it more edible, and whilst you're at it see if you can make it bigger with more crunchy info. | *'''[[Yoshi's Cookie]]''' ([[:Category:Articles with long trivia sections|trivia]]) – I'd love a cookie, unfortunately the trivia section on this one makes it hard to digest. Trim parts off to make it more edible, and whilst you're at it see if you can make it bigger with more crunchy info. | ||