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===[[World 5 (New Super Mario Bros.)]]===
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|lastedit=07:16, 18 May 2010
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==== Support ====
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#{{User|Gamefreak75}} It needs some fixing up and taken out of first person POV.
#{{User|Gamefreak75}} It needs some fixing up and taken out of first person POV.
#{{User|Fawfulfury65}} The article appears to be incomplete, and 5 - B does not have the Star Coin locations listed. The level summaries could also be longer.
#{{User|Fawfulfury65}} The article appears to be incomplete, and 5 - B does not have the Star Coin locations listed. The level summaries could also be longer.
#{{user|Bloc Partier}} -- The article is not ready. The opening lead is too short and it is very generic; I'm sure that one could expand upon the theme of the level, the fact that there's Hammer Bros. in it, etc. Also, the Star Coin sections are all in first person. They're all imperative sentences, but they are first person, nonetheless. You should also probably choose between "Mario" and "the player," since having both looks kinda bad. Lastly, the whole article is in need of some general grammar and English improvements.
#{{user|Bloc Partier}} -- The article is not ready. The opening lead is too short and it is very generic; I'm sure that one could expand upon the theme of the level, the fact that there's Hammer Bros. in it, etc. Also, the Star Coin sections all have "you." They're all imperative sentences, but they are second person, nonetheless. You should also probably choose between "Mario" and "the player," since having both looks kinda bad. Lastly, the whole article is in need of some general grammar and English improvements.
#{{User|Commander Code-8}} The start is too short.
#{{User|Bowser's luma}} Per all.


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'''Fawfulfury65'''
'''Fawfulfury65'''
#{{user|KS3}} 5-B has the star coins, and per Bloc Partier's comment below.
#{{user|KS3}} 5-B has the star coins, and per Bloc Partier's comment below.
'''Gamefreak75'''
#{{User|KS3}} Per Bloc Partier's comment.
#{{User|Time Q}}: Invalid reason. Why wouldn't it work out? Also, articles can be featured even if you haven't finished revamping sections.


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@Commander Code-8: Again, it ''will'' work as a featured article. As I said above, any article can be featured if it meets the requirements. {{user|Bloc Partier}}
@Commander Code-8: Again, it ''will'' work as a featured article. As I said above, any article can be featured if it meets the requirements. {{user|Bloc Partier}}
Ok, so the Star Coin locations are in for 5 - B. Problem is, they're horribly written. "Throw a shell at the small spot"? What does that mean? {{User|Fawfulfury65}}
:I agree, it seemed like a last-ditch effort. When I feel like it, I'll redo that section. :/ {{User|Gamefreak75}}
If you have to say "I know this is wierd..." do you really want it to be a Featured Article? This article meets the standards but just barely, and if it were to be Featured it might take away the place of a better article. {{User|Bowser's luma}}
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