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I see you took it from [[Tiki Tong]], but if it's already tagged with {{tem|ref needed}}, it's probably a good idea not to spread it any further. {{User:Mario jc/sig}} 22:40, February 2, 2022 (EST) | I see you took it from [[Tiki Tong]], but if it's already tagged with {{tem|ref needed}}, it's probably a good idea not to spread it any further. {{User:Mario jc/sig}} 22:40, February 2, 2022 (EST) | ||
== Commas == | |||
[[Special:Diff/3757217|You just got off a block for this]]; do not remove valid content without giving a reason. Also, don't remove commas from multiple adjectives like "large, gray Hootz"; those are grammatically correct. {{User:Mario jc/sig}} 11:10, September 17, 2022 (EDT) | |||
== DJ Phantasmagloria == | |||
In both of the article's mention of "an octuplet of Goobs", change "octuplet" to "octet". {{unsigned|99.129.228.221}} | |||
== Pompy == | |||
Remove "adorned with the Snowmad insignia" in the sentence describing Pompy's appearance as the character's helmet does not display the Snowmads' insignia. {{unsigned|99.129.228.221}} | |||
== Previewing / number words == | |||
{{preview-reminder}} | |||
Also, please stop changing numerical words to more fancy and increasingly complicated group terms like "quintet". There's nothing wrong with just using simple numbers to describe how many of something there are, which are straightforward and universally understood, and changing these just makes it less clear to the reader (and goes against [[MarioWiki:Good writing#Epic.2C_flowery.2C_and_grimdark_writing|MarioWiki:Good writing]], which I suggest reading since most of your edits revolve around changing the wording of articles). {{User:Mario jc/sig}} 23:57, October 2, 2023 (EDT) | |||