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:Unlike most other implied items, this one has artwork, a story, and a purpose. Just because it's not seen doesn't mean it's "implied to exist." It just simply isn't shown to the player. {{User:Alex95/sig}} 20:31, 27 June 2016 (EDT) | :Unlike most other implied items, this one has artwork, a story, and a purpose. Just because it's not seen doesn't mean it's "implied to exist." It just simply isn't shown to the player. {{User:Alex95/sig}} 20:31, 27 June 2016 (EDT) | ||
::The problem statement is "The Dark Stone is never really seen in the game"; it's considered poor writing because it's informal, but more importantly, vague and wishy-washy. Can anyone at least rewrite this part to be more precise in what "never really seen" is supposed to mean? If writing isn't your strong suit, is it actually ever seen in game? We need a definite statement. {{User:Bazooka Mario/sig}} 19:00, 28 June 2016 (EDT) | ::The problem statement is "The Dark Stone is never really seen in the game"; it's considered poor writing because it's informal, but more importantly, vague and wishy-washy. Can anyone at least rewrite this part to be more precise in what "never really seen" is supposed to mean? If writing isn't your strong suit, is it actually ever seen in game? We need a definite statement. {{User:Bazooka Mario/sig}} 19:00, 28 June 2016 (EDT) | ||
:::I changed it to "Since the Dark Stone was destroyed before the events of the game, this magical object is never shown to the player". [[User:Cobalt David|Cobalt David]] ([[User talk:Cobalt David|talk]]) 17:54, July 31, 2021 (EDT) | |||