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#{{User|Mario}} Not the best writing. There is past tense (easily corrected), constant referrals to "he", but has absurd statements, ("''Lakitu's egg-throwing skills are temporarily amplified to match those of the Yoshis''"; "''Thanks to the prosperity and fame of the Mario Kart series, Lakitu often takes up similar roles in other spin-offs.''"). Missing information from ''Dance Dance Revolution: Mario Mix'', ''Mario Pinball Land'', minor information from ''Mario Tennis'' games, ''Mario Party'' series (minigame appearances) The Official stats and information section is incomplete, and there is an empty section. Overall, the article has a few blemishes I am than capable of correcting. | #{{User|Mario}} Not the best writing. There is past tense (easily corrected), constant referrals to "he", but has absurd statements, ("''Lakitu's egg-throwing skills are temporarily amplified to match those of the Yoshis''"; "''Thanks to the prosperity and fame of the Mario Kart series, Lakitu often takes up similar roles in other spin-offs.''"). Missing information from ''Dance Dance Revolution: Mario Mix'', ''Mario Pinball Land'', minor information from ''Mario Tennis'' games, ''Mario Party'' series (minigame appearances) The Official stats and information section is incomplete, and there is an empty section. Overall, the article has a few blemishes I am than capable of correcting. | ||
#{{User|Randombob-omb4761}} There is '''2''' rewrite templates on that page. | |||
#{{User|Vommack}} Considering the whole page has a rewrite? No. Your reason for supporting also leads me to believe you're basing this off the character instead of writing quality... | #{{User|Vommack}} Considering the whole page has a rewrite? No. Your reason for supporting also leads me to believe you're basing this off the character instead of writing quality... | ||
#{{User|Ninelevendo}} It may be a main part of the Mario Kart series, but it's Mario Tennis and golf sections are bad. I also find that there is a bit of image clutter and it looks rather cramped. And there are ''lots'' of sections with one-liners. | #{{User|Ninelevendo}} It may be a main part of the Mario Kart series, but it's Mario Tennis and golf sections are bad. I also find that there is a bit of image clutter and it looks rather cramped. And there are ''lots'' of sections with one-liners. | ||