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-{{FANOMSTAT
+{{FANOMFAIL
-|nominated=11:48, Febuary 19th, 2011 (GMT)
+|nominated=11:48, February 19th, 2011 (GMT)
-|passed=<!--When it is 5-0, put the time (such as 12:10, 11 December 2009) of the fifth support/removal of last oppose by copying it from the history of the page.-->
+|lastedit=May 19, 2011
+|nosupport=true
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 #{{User|Reddragon19k}}
 #{{User|Mesuxelf}}
-#{{User|DKC2 King Liam}}
-#{{User|MushroomMadness1221}}
 #{{User|Ilove marioandtoad}}
 #{{User|Luigi time!}}
-#{{User|SWFlash}}
 #{{User|Bowser's luma}}
 #{{User|Yoshidude99}}
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 #{{User|Bop1996}}
 #{{User|BabyLuigiOnFire}}
-#{{User|Rosalina'sSoulMate}}
 #{{User|Tails777}}
+#{{User|DKPetey99}}
+#{{User|Superfiremario}}
+#{{User|SWFlash}}
+#{{User|Freakworld}}
+#{{User|Catboy41}}
+#{{User|WigglerWhoopin'Warrior135}}
+#{{User|Lakituthequick}}
+#{{User|Gigaremo}}
+#{{User|SKmarioman}}
+#{{User|Mario4Ever}}
+#{{User|Luigi Time}}
+#{{User|YL}}
 ==== Oppose ====
-#{{User|DarkLuigi}} Per BabyLuigiOnFire
 #{{User|Fawfulfury65}} Per my comments and BabyLuigiOnFire.
 #{{User|MeritC}} This has potential for being featured, but for now, I sadly have to oppose per reasons above. Let's see if we all can follow through on BLOF's suggestions before another "featured article" attempt takes place in the future.
-#{{User|DKPetey99}} Per my comments.
 #{{User|Smileymiley5001}}I bought the game yesterday,and there is a lot of stuff in it that I cant find in the article or articles relating to the subject.
-#{{User|MrConcreteDonkey}} - Per BLOF, MeritC and Fawfulfury.
+#{{User|MrConcreteDonkey}} - Per MeritC and Fawfulfury.
 #{{User|Pokémon Trainer Mario}} Per all.
 #{{User|HenryClaylogan}} Per all.
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 #{{User|Bowser jrs number 1 fan}} Needs more stuff done so basically Per all
 #{{User|IGGY7735}} Per all. Looks Better.
+#{{User|LeftyGreenMario}} The article is good, but it still needs some sprucing up. The information it gives out gets very redundant and repetitive at some points (like controls and how it keeps saying "this character then makes a shot"). These two issues bother me very much; it makes the article very boring to read. I just edited the controls section (which was a sea of text). I hope this won't get reverted because I'm a visual learner myself, and I think seeing all these words instead of simple icons would be more difficult to read, understand, and maintain interest.
+#{{User|Goomba's Shoe15}} Per All
+#{{User|Conanshinichi}} Per All
 ==== Removal of Opposes ====
-;DarkLuigi
+;Fawfulfury65 as well as MeritC, Smileymiley5001, MrConcreteDonkey, Pokémon Trainer Mario, HenryClaylogan, Fuzzipede27, Baby Mario Bloops, Bowser jrs number 1 fan, LeftyGreenMario, Goomba's Shoe15, and IGGY7735.
-#{{User|SWFlash}} BabyLuigiOnFire is now supporting this.
+#{{User|SWFlash}} The article is already overly long, there's barely anything to add.
-#{{User|MrConcreteDonkey}} - Per SWFlash.
+#{{User|DKPetey99}} Whoever is referring to BLOF, she changed her vote so you can't "Per BabyLuigiOnFire" if she is supporting now.
 ==== Comments ====
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 The article looks good now. I am ready to support. {{User|Tails777}}
+I voted earlier and the article looks good! OK! [[User:Reddragon19k|Reddragon19k]] 16:53, 28 March 2011 (EDT)
+Now since BLOF reverted my edits it's now has {{tem|rewrite-you}}. I've changed my vote. {{User|SWFlash}}
+:Hey, but if you keep on writing, "the players should" all the time, it looks very repetitive and boring. I wish there was a shorter way to write the methods for unlocking. {{User|LeftyGreenMario}}
+::I've rewritted that part, seems to be good now. {{User|SWFlash}}
+:::Do lines like ''"Play 40 matches"'' refer to the the reader directly? It does not contain the word you or anything. It's just ''"Play 40 matches"''. I think it's not a real problem if the text says ''"The player should"'' or simply ''"Play"''. Other featured articles like [[Mario Kart Wii]] also use lines like ''"Win 100cc Leaf Cup or play 1,050 races"'' and nobody made a problem of that. {{User|Arend}}
+::::''Play X'' is actually does, because it motivates the reader to do the task, much like all other "you should do X" things. About MKWii: someone should rewrite it. {{User|SWFlash}}
+::::I also wonder how it got featured with those yous. I've fixed the how to unlock section, I didn't find any other ''you'' section yet. {{User|SWFlash}}
+So, it has been {{#expr:floor(abs({{#time:U}}-{{#time:U|12 Feb 11}})/86400)}} days already, how many more days should we wait to feature the article? {{User|SWFlash}}
+When it meets all the requirements i guess {{User|Iggykoopa}}
+:The nomination of this article would need to stop and remain within the failed nominations. If the article is still under improvement then use notice tags on it until the aproppiate moment to renominate comes. {{user|Coincollector}}
+::I think this nomination should be archived it's been 4 months... i think {{User|Goomba's Shoe15}}

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