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==Introduction sentence== | |||
Was seeing this on the main page and am thinking the first sentence of this article could use some rewriting, though I don't want to mess with it due to the featured status. It seems clumsy with two clauses starting with "and" in a row (mayhap it can be split into two sentences?) and isn't clear on the character's status as an anti-hero (it first implies it as his core role, then contradicts itself in stating that he is only "occasionally an anti-hero" later in the same sentence).--[[User:Vellidragon|vellidragon]] ([[User talk:Vellidragon|talk]]) 17:10, 21 July 2013 (EDT) | |||