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:I have played the game, and one thing I should point out is "Jr painting his father", which is shown in the pictures in the credits, so that could probably just be reworded. However, I think mentioning Color Splash is stretching it a bit. Another is the "level changes" one, not just the characters' faster speed but also the fact that the Switch doesn't use a microphone. {{User:Keyblade Master/sig}} 14:11, May 5, 2021 (EDT)
:I have played the game, and one thing I should point out is "Jr painting his father", which is shown in the pictures in the credits, so that could probably just be reworded. However, I think mentioning Color Splash is stretching it a bit. Another is the "level changes" one, not just the characters' faster speed but also the fact that the Switch doesn't use a microphone. {{User:Keyblade Master/sig}} 14:11, May 5, 2021 (EDT)
::I've attempted to rewrite the gameplay section a bit: I did my best to organize paragraphs based on attributes (basic gameplay, world map, level layouts, power-ups, unlockables, misc) and rewrote some sentences to be more active than passive, to make it flow a bit better than a bullet-less listicle. Any other suggestions to the changes section. {{User:Ray Trace/sig}} 16:04, May 5, 2021 (EDT)
::I've attempted to rewrite the gameplay section a bit: I did my best to organize paragraphs based on attributes (basic gameplay, world map, level layouts, power-ups, unlockables, misc) and rewrote some sentences to be more active than passive, to make it flow a bit better than a bullet-less listicle. Any other suggestions to the changes section. {{User:Ray Trace/sig}} 16:04, May 5, 2021 (EDT)
:::I made a couple grammatical/sentence corrections as suggested by Scrooge200, but there is still some ways to go. {{User|TasteTheFiresOfHelp}}