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|nominated=10:27, 28 November 2012 (EST) | |nominated=10:27, 28 November 2012 (EST) | ||
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==== Support ==== | ==== Support ==== | ||
#{{User|Megadardery}} This Article is very clean and very good | #{{User|Megadardery}} This Article is very clean and very good | ||
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#{{User|Super Candy}} | #{{User|Super Candy}} | ||
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could easily be shortened to two or three instances without losing any plot-relevant informations, this also applies to most of the rest. In that respect, your edits don't improve that problem and infact makes thing marginally worse. | could easily be shortened to two or three instances without losing any plot-relevant informations, this also applies to most of the rest. In that respect, your edits don't improve that problem and infact makes thing marginally worse. | ||
However, I do think there'd be some merit to having a separate page (which admitelly, might contradict what [[MarioWiki:Subpages | However, I do think there'd be some merit to having a separate page (which admitelly, might contradict what [[MarioWiki:Subpages]] says about pages being "not just as an extension of an existing page " - but this can be talked about later) for a reasonably well-written chapter-by-chapter summary, as the chapters in the Paper Mario series are essentialy self-contained stories in themselves. This'd leave the main TTYD page with an actual plot ''summary'', and then I might get behind this nomination- but with the plot summary as it is right now, yeah no. ----{{User|Glowsquid}} 12:43, 2 December 2012 (EST) | ||
*{{User|Megadardery}} Is this better? I'v been working on it for 3 days.. | *{{User|Megadardery}} Is this better? I'v been working on it for 3 days.. | ||
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I scanned the rest of the article and it doesn't look bad at all, though I'll let others evaluate it more indepth. --[[User:Glowsquid|Glowsquid]] ([[User talk:Glowsquid|talk]]) 12:38, 4 December 2012 (EST) | I scanned the rest of the article and it doesn't look bad at all, though I'll let others evaluate it more indepth. --[[User:Glowsquid|Glowsquid]] ([[User talk:Glowsquid|talk]]) 12:38, 4 December 2012 (EST) | ||
:Yeah it looks much better, but I haven't read it in depth yet. {{User|BabyLuigiOnFire}} | :Yeah it looks much better, but I haven't read it in depth yet. {{User|BabyLuigiOnFire}} | ||
Looking through, I see a few other areas that could use touching up. Right off the bat, I noticed that the first reference to Koops doesn't feature a link to his page. The passage on the 3 days of excess could use some work too, one sentence looks like it was split into two without the second ever receiving a beginning, instead starting with some extra space and a comma. That paragraph also includes a run-on sentence, excessive use of "and", and a few others. It needs some proofreading. --[[User:Swagner|Swagner]] January 1 2013 | |||