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The tone of your writing is very informal and does not follow the [[MarioWiki:Good Writing|good writing guidelines]], most of which are more opinionated than informative. This is ''not'' how articles in an encyclopedia are supposed to be written, and you're expected to write in a professional, unopinionated and formal manner. This is a wiki, not a strategy guide. Also, avoid using the word "you" and use "the player" or the character's name instead. Thanks. {{user:Mario jc/sig}}
:Hello the edit on the [[Flame Runner]] page wasn't really good. You can't put opinion or strategy in your edits because some may disagree, this wiki is meant to be an encyclopaedia. Not a walkthrough or strategy guide you should read the [[Mariowiki:Manual of Style|Manual of Style]] on how to edit thanks. {{User:Fawful's Minion/sig}} 01:46, 13 May 2016 (EDT)
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	The tone of your writing is very informal and does not follow the [[MarioWiki:Good ~~writing~~\|good writing guidelines]], most of which are more opinionated than informative. This is ''not'' how articles in an encyclopedia are supposed to be written, and you're expected to write in a professional, unopinionated and formal manner. This is a wiki, not a strategy guide. Also, avoid using the word "you" and use "the player" or the character's name instead. Thanks. {{user:Mario jc/sig}}		The tone of your writing is very informal and does not follow the [[MarioWiki:Good Writing\|good writing guidelines]], most of which are more opinionated than informative. This is ''not'' how articles in an encyclopedia are supposed to be written, and you're expected to write in a professional, unopinionated and formal manner. This is a wiki, not a strategy guide. Also, avoid using the word "you" and use "the player" or the character's name instead. Thanks. {{user:Mario jc/sig}}
	:Hello the edit on the [[Flame Runner]] page wasn't really good. You can't put opinion or strategy in your edits because some may disagree, this wiki is meant to be an encyclopaedia. Not a walkthrough or strategy guide you should read the [[Mariowiki:Manual of Style\|Manual of Style]] on how to edit thanks. {{User:Fawful's Minion/sig}} 01:46, 13 May 2016 (EDT)		:Hello the edit on the [[Flame Runner]] page wasn't really good. You can't put opinion or strategy in your edits because some may disagree, this wiki is meant to be an encyclopaedia. Not a walkthrough or strategy guide you should read the [[Mariowiki:Manual of Style\|Manual of Style]] on how to edit thanks. {{User:Fawful's Minion/sig}} 01:46, 13 May 2016 (EDT)