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#{{User|BabyLuigiOnFire}} The story section is written badly. It should use a rewrite. For example, it calls Excess Express the "beautiful train". That's a serious no-no, plus a hint of bias. | #{{User|BabyLuigiOnFire}} The story section is written badly. It should use a rewrite. For example, it calls Excess Express the "beautiful train". That's a serious no-no, plus a hint of bias. | ||
#{{User|Glowsquid}} - Per BLOF; said plot summary is overly long and falls into most of the pitfalls described in [[Mariowiki:Good Writing]]. | #{{User|Glowsquid}} - Per BLOF; said plot summary is overly long and falls into most of the pitfalls described in [[Mariowiki:Good Writing]]. | ||
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