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#{{User|DKPetey99}} I still see some past tense. I also see no Super Mario-Kun. Petey must've appeared in the Mario & Luigi: Partners in Time comic. At least one of them. Some grammar mistakes. For example: ''Petey Piranha appear as an unlockable captain in the Wii game Mario Strikers Charged Football.'' I know it's just one, but there is some more. Like this one: ''Petey is going to appear in Mario Party DS as the first person who needs help, but he is replaced by Wiggler, and his board, "Petey's Greenhouse", is replaced by Wiggler's Garden.'' And in some opening lines, it says ''In Mario Power Tennis, he appears as an unlockable character alongside Fly Guy, Paratroopa and Wiggler. He can be unlocked by beating the two Special Tournaments - Fire and Thunder - in Doubles. In this game, he appears once again as a power character; therefore, his shots travels faster than usual, but he is slower than most other characters. He is also the largest character in the game, giving him a very large reach, but opponents have an easier time hitting him.'' All it says is "He." Who is "he"?  Also, I think sections where it says, "Petey", should be changed to Petey Piranha because its his full name, not a nickname. To wrap up my vote, there are now two templates. NSMB section seems to be biased. Saying: "This can be more difficult", etc. Tense tag is put back on SMS section due to use of past tense.
#{{User|DKPetey99}} I still see some past tense. I also see no Super Mario-Kun. Petey must've appeared in the Mario & Luigi: Partners in Time comic. At least one of them. Some grammar mistakes. For example: ''Petey Piranha appear as an unlockable captain in the Wii game Mario Strikers Charged Football.'' I know it's just one, but there is some more. Like this one: ''Petey is going to appear in Mario Party DS as the first person who needs help, but he is replaced by Wiggler, and his board, "Petey's Greenhouse", is replaced by Wiggler's Garden.'' And in some opening lines, it says ''In Mario Power Tennis, he appears as an unlockable character alongside Fly Guy, Paratroopa and Wiggler. He can be unlocked by beating the two Special Tournaments - Fire and Thunder - in Doubles. In this game, he appears once again as a power character; therefore, his shots travels faster than usual, but he is slower than most other characters. He is also the largest character in the game, giving him a very large reach, but opponents have an easier time hitting him.'' All it says is "He." Who is "he"?  Also, I think sections where it says, "Petey", should be changed to Petey Piranha because its his full name, not a nickname. To wrap up my vote, there are now two templates. NSMB section seems to be biased. Saying: "This can be more difficult", etc. Tense tag is put back on SMS section due to use of past tense.
#{{User|Superfiremario}} Per DKPetey99


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