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'''Commander Code-8''' | '''Commander Code-8''' | ||
#{{User|KS3}} The article starts off with a lot of sentences, not just one. | #{{User|KS3}} The article starts off with a lot of sentences, not just one. | ||
#{{User|LeftyGreenMario}} Three long sentences doesn't sound like one. | |||
==== Comments ==== | ==== Comments ==== | ||
I attempted fixing everything you guys think needs fixing up. I think it's fine, but someone else needs to fix all my grammar errors, since it's hard to revise your own text. You can ask me what else needs to be added and I'll gladly add it in! {{User|BabyLuigiOnFire}} | I attempted fixing everything you guys think needs fixing up. I think it's fine, but someone else needs to fix all my grammar errors, since it's hard to revise your own text. You can ask me what else needs to be added and I'll gladly add it in! {{User|BabyLuigiOnFire}} | ||