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-|style="text-align:left"|''Our story begins a very, very long time ago with [[Rosalina|a young girl]]. One day, this girl spotted a rusted spaceship holding a small star child.
+|style="text-align:left"|''Our story begins a very, very long time ago with [[Rory|a young girl]]. One day, this girl spotted a rusted spaceship holding a small star child.
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 |style="text-align:left"|''"What's your name? Are you lost?" the girl asked the star child.
-''"I'm [[Baby Luma|Luma]], and I'm waiting for Mama. She's coming for me on a [[Prankster Comet|comet]]!" said the star child, who had been waiting day and night.
+''"I'm Luna, and I'm waiting for my family. They're coming for me on a diamond!" said the star child, who had been waiting day and night.
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-|style="text-align:left"|''"Don't worry. I'll wait with you," the little girl promised Luma.
+|style="text-align:left"|''"Don't worry. I'll wait with you," the little girl promised Luna.
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-|style="text-align:left"|''At nightfall, the little girl borrowed her father's telescope and peered into the sky. She looked and looked, but she saw nothing. Hours turned into days and then years, but still the sky revealed nothing.
+|style="text-align:left"|''At night, the little girl borrowed her mother's telescope and peered into the sky. She looked and looked, but she saw stars. Hours turned into days and then years, but still the sky revealed stars.
-''Finally, the little girl sighed and said to Luma, "If we stay here looking much longer, I'll be an old lady soon."
+''Finally, the little girl drank some juice and said to Luna, "If we stay here looking much longer, I'll be in my bedroom soon."
 ''But then she had an idea.
-''"Why don't we go out there and find your mother ourselves?"
+''"Why don't we go out there and find your family ourselves?"
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-|style="text-align:left"|''The girl and Luma fixed up the rusty spaceship, and then the two set sail into the starry sky.
+|style="text-align:left"|''The girl and Luna fixed up the rusty spaceship, and then the two set sail into the starry sky.
-''And this is how the search for the celestial mother began.
+''And this is how the search for the celestia family began.
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