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Basically, the problem I have with this article is that sentences keep starting with a preposition phrase, which means that it's a passive tense. I'd do some more rewriting, but I'll note to ya that there are pretty noticeable punctuation errors in the article (such as placing a colon after a verb when making a list). {{User:BabyLuigiOnFire/sig}} 12:56, 28 April 2013 (EDT) | Basically, the problem I have with this article is that sentences keep starting with a preposition phrase, which means that it's a passive tense. I'd do some more rewriting, but I'll note to ya that there are pretty noticeable punctuation errors in the article (such as placing a colon after a verb when making a list). {{User:BabyLuigiOnFire/sig}} 12:56, 28 April 2013 (EDT) | ||
:Actually, I was planning to do it anyway, so I don't really mind the added work {{User:BabyLuigiOnFire/sig}} 13:52, 4 May 2013 (EDT) | |||
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