User talk:83.143.99.132

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Hello! Thanks for your contributions. When writing, avoid using first- and second-person perspective with pronouns like "you". As an encyclopedia site, we write in third-person and not from a specific person's point of view or referring directly to the reader, so the term "the player", or the character's name, should instead be used in the pronouns' place.

I've also made a number of fixes to your edits (for instance:
"flower coin" should be lowercase;
"celling" should be spelled "ceiling";
use "the first/second/third coin" instead of "coin 1/2/3" when referring to them in a sentence;
and it reads better going straight into the location description, e.g. "(character) Hidden Character Block is located..." rather than "A (character) Hidden Character Block." as a standalone sentence).

I would suggest going over them if you intend to continue adding Hidden Character Block sections. Mario JC 22:43, May 3, 2024 (EDT)

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Conversely, don't lowercase words that are actually proper nouns, like "Talking Flower" and "Wonder Seed".

Also, make sure you link properly to the Toads and Yoshis:

[[Yellow Toad and Blue Toad|Blue Toad]]
[[Yoshi (species)|Red Yoshi]]

and small numbers should be written as words, not digits. Mario JC 08:50, May 5, 2024 (EDT)

You're still changing proper nouns to lowercase. Don't add piped links for those names and just write them as is ([[Wonder Seed]], not [[Wonder Seed|wonder seed]]). If you don't know the official capitalisation, check the title on its article (generally, the made-up enemy and character names like "Lakitu" are always capitalised). Mario JC 09:13, May 6, 2024 (EDT)

You don't need to repeat the block location if it is already mentioned in the layout. It's why your section is being removed from Welcome to the Flower Kingdom!; please make sure to check the history page to see the reasoning behind a reverted edit before making it again. Mario JC 07:13, May 11, 2024 (EDT)

Its vs it's

The possessive "its" as in "on its edge" does not have an apostrophe. "It's" is a different word, which is short for "it is". Mario JC 09:49, May 15, 2024 (EDT)