MarioWiki:Featured articles/N1/Bianco Hills

Support

 * 1) Well written and organized, contains multiple high quality images, each individual mission is accurately described and each Blue Coin and even fruit locations are stated. On a side note it is also used as the example article for the Star and Shine Missions Collaboration.

Oppose

 * 1) There's quite a bit of problems with the tense, and it reads more like a walkthrough than an actual article. The parts that describe the camera's movements also seem rather odd.

Comments
I have one problem: the future tense is used a lot in this article. It needs to be changed to past tense.
 * D'oh, I meant present tense. >.<

Time Turner, what would you do if you thought the article is written like a walkthrough? I'm okay with the article being written as that.

Trivia is a little long, and all that talking about camera is bizarre!