User talk:UhHuhAlrightDaisy/Archive 1

Hello
Would you conider reading my proposal? (follow link on my signature)

Why do you keep removing the link to Filler Characters on the Big Eight article? It is a note worthy thing thing to know.

It's because I don't think Waluigi and Daisy should be considered filler characters. They might not be apart of the big eight but their more important then filler characters. Infact I'm creating an article about a level inbetween filler and the big eight.User:Fixitup

How about you create the article first and we'll see.

Okay I've created a page for Elite Underdogs and Minor Underdogs, but I don't know how to create that bar/list the says the article name then under it the characters and stuff like that.User:Fixitup

Recent Edits to Princess Daisy
First of all, at this wiki, we prefer to always italicize game titles, and link them the first time mentioned in each article. In addition, some of your sentences are either too short, too long, or don't make much sense. "In Double Dash there was also something highly noticed. It was Daisy's memorable quote 'Hi I'm Daisy'. It's speculated that many haters of this quote aren't even annoyed by it but are just simply reminded of it so much that they dislike it." It's speculated...what? Doesn't make much sense, and I'm not even sure if the quote is important enough to be in the article. "Early videos of MP8 for the Wii show every character from MP7 and it's been confirmed that Blooper and Hammer Bro. are the secret characters but the game is still in early design so no one knows what will be changed about the characters before release." Too long, where's some commas? "In Mario Party 3 Daisy served the same purpose as in Tennis except her tomboyish side shined much larger when she sent Bowser soaring with one mighty punch." In the MP series, whatever happens is mostly based on gameplay, so not necessarily does Daisy's tomboyish side "shine much larger". We appreciate your edits to improve the article, but try to make your sentences clearer. Thanks for reading. 01:27, 2 January 2007 (EST) Oh, and "shone" is better grammar then "shined". =)
 * Maybe I'll change that then. User:Fixitup
 * Ok I'll try to fix some errors then. User: Fixitup
 * I don't think you understand, this happend in the story line movie part which whent with the story and as long as you got to that point the clip always played. It had nothing to do with the person playing really. User: Fixitup
 * Daisy isn't even in the intro Cut-Scean or Story Mode. I Played it Numerous Times and never saw her punch or what-not to Bowser.
 * You are right about her not being in the intro and you're right about her not being in story mode..KINDA! She is in story mode but she isn't playable. User:Fixitup
 * Then where does she beat up Bowser? I use Wario all the time, never ran into her.
 * ...Hmm if I remember correctly you have to go through the badges of whatever and there is a badge for each character you have to fight and Bowser tries to take one of the badges then Daisy beats him away and then you have to fight her for it.
 * Your right! Holy Cow, sorry I mis-judged. Its right after the Stamp of courage or something.
 * No problem, and thank you for checking =). User:Fixitup

Daisy
Ooops, sorry 'bout that. Must've pressed something to make that code. never played Super Mario land, only it's sequels. Added it though.

Dasiy Article
When I have a large amount of spare time, I will review the Daisy article and give my evaluation. I don't have a lot of free time this week, but I will try to get it done by Saturday. I hope this works for you. I'm sorry if otherwise. -- Son of Suns


 * Okay. I placed my second review in the Daisy nomination page. -- Son of Suns

Some confusion. User:Fixitup
 * 1. Ok
 * 2. Ok
 * 3. This doesn't make sense to me. Why would a section about her appearing in minor games include what she does in every game?
 * 4. Ok but what doyou mean by removal of all "you"s
 * 5. So you're saying they should just be moved right?
 * 6. I thought I already explained that she bribed him for the badge, you can't get to much more descriptive then that.
 * 7. It was rewritten it was just done in the same way but I could put it in paragraph form. And as for physical appearance and traits does that just mean her strength and abilities? Im confused on that..
 * 8. Sure thing.
 * 9. Ill try.
 * 10. So you want it to stay with the descriptions of video games like in the beggining, then go to minor game appearances and then different paragraphs about how she looked in certain games?

Response:

3. What I mean is; can you put a very brief description of what she does in these minor games? Don't go into super detail. We just need to know her function (does she save the game, does she give hints, does she caddy for Luigi, etc.) 4. The Super Mario Wiki is a pseudo-formal encyclopedia. The use of the second-person, such as "you" and "your", is seen as very poor writing. Instead of writing "you", you should write Princess Daisy (if the article talks about what Daisy is doing, even if the player is controlling her, as you are not in the game itself) or "the player(s)", if the article is describing something the person playing the game specifically has to do (like press the "A" button). 5. Either move items regarding what I listed to the appropriate section or delete it from the article if it is already mentioned in that section. There is some overlap that needs to be trimmed. 6. The problem is "bribed" does not necesarrily mean "seductive". Wario can bribe characters with a lot of cash, but he's not seductive because of that. What did Daisy do that was seductive? Did she wink at him, flirt with him, give him a kiss, lift up her dress and show off her toned legs? Where is the seduction in the bribe? 7. Physical Appearance and Traits is what Daisy looks like, what she wears, traits about her that aren't powers, abilities, or personality. This doesn't have to be too long (check out the Yoshi article). A lot of this is in the appearance section I believe. 10. I goofed on that last one. The article should have in-universe video game info first (such as Biography, Personality, Powers and Abilities, etc.) then move to out-of-universe video game info, such as appearance development, as well as other minor video game info, then move to depictions in other media at the very end.

Hope this helps! -- Son of Suns

Ow my hands:

Okie dokie, I've done quite a bit of stuff and was wandering if you could tell me what I've completed out of your stuff. User:Fixitup

Party 8 Story
What is the source of the story of Mario Party 8? Sounds interesting!

Nintendo Press Room I think. User:Fixitup

Daisy FA
I'll give my evaluation ASAP. Maybe even tonight! -- Son of Suns

Thank you! User:Fixitup

Sorry if I wasn't paying attention to the progress of Daisy. However, in the FA rules it states that "Supporters are expected to help fix the problems pointed out by objectors and contact them to reevaluate the article." If you feel the article is complete don't hesitate to ask for a re-evaluation. -- Son of Suns

Will do. User:Fixitup

Okay. Basically the Powers and Abilities section needs to be completely rewritten - we don't need the full description of every single move, just the name and the general traits of the move. Also, a lot of game titles need to be italicized. Other than that, this article is looking pretty good. -- Son of Suns

Thanks, I'll do my best to fix that. User:Fixitup

Where do you find your character artwork for Mario Party 8?
Where do you find your character artwork for Mario Party 8?

--Bentendo 15:04, 22 February 2007 (EST)

Are you asking where I found them? Or where they are on mariowiki? User:Fixitup

Where you found them --Bentendo 00:56, 24 February 2007 (EST)

Someone posted them on the official nintendo forums. User:Fixitup

Resp:
Alright, 'u' can have some of my stuff for your user page. &copy;oin&cent;ollectorYou have my permission :)

Help:
ctrl + c keys, you copy ctrl + v keys, you paste very, very easy...

I don't think you understand.. I can't copy those things like that.

Third Eye
I only took it off the page because someone else deleted it. I was the one who put it there in the first place.----

Extra images
Fixitup, I've noted that there are more images of Daisy rendered in mario party 3 and mario tennis 64. I ask, you can find those images? because I don't know where i can found... any questions? maybe... Bomba¥ Du&cent;kI found ones, but they're hideous I don't know of anymore. User:Fixitup

Mario Strikers
lol, that's fine. Easy mistake to make... especially with the European names floating around, too. ;) --Stumpers

Striker Bios
Hey, Fixitup. I just saw your comment today:

"definitions own it should be quotes of the actual bios from the game not stuff on their media appearances"

Some problems with this:
 * 1) The game hasn't been released yet. Therefore, there are no bios from the game.  By the way, biographies may be considered copyrighted work, meaning that you must receive permission from Nintendo to post them.  There's nothing wrong with minor quotes, but it shouldn't replace our own writing.
 * 2) I'm not sure what you mean by media appearances. The videos on this page are some of the videos we got the information from you can see Princess Peach's entrance and such there, for example.
 * 3) All of our information is from videos, screenshots, and reliable news sources.
 * Yes, there is speculation on this page, but that is typical of an upcoming game article. We have made sure that readers know what is speculation and what is not.  If you have any problems with speculation on this page, please edit (not delete) accordingly or post your concernin the talk page first before simply deleting info that Coincollector, myself, and other users have been working on for weeks.  It's very sad to see something you spent time on get destroyed, but it's great when you see that someone has validated your writing by editing it.  As Wayoshi (he's second-in-command around here) commented, our speculation is fine.
 * 1) It appears that the speculation that was in the character section prior to your edits has been validated by recent news. While I will still be sure to say what is speculation and what is not in the section until I read the article, there is no reason to delete information/speculation until it has been proven false.

Thanks for your time and dedication to the Wiki! --Stumpers

However, thanks for show those character's mega strikes show! &euro;zlo

Character Profiles
That was NES Boy who changed up the character section. It's so pretty! (especially with the Mega Strike Diagram next to it! (and we know who made that :D)  Anyway, I'm glad that the "Charged team," as I have unofficially decided to call us, is on the same page with everything!  Oh, and by the way, feel free to send me a message if I've messed something up, okay?  See you soon!

Oh, and here's my list of the "Charged Team"
 * Coincollector
 * NES Boy
 * Fixitup
 * ME!

Until next time! --Stumpers

Popular
Wow... Nice talk page. Mine's deserted... there should be tumbleweeds going across like one of those old westerns. I'm jealous. --Stumpers


 * Really? I didn't think mine was that impressive but thanks :) --User:Fixitup


 * Check mine out. You will be impressed when you come back to your own, Mr. Popular! --Stumpers

Mario Strikers Charged
Hey, Fixitup.

(Notes: There are 2 entrance types, dont put down mega strike info until name is provided, daisy has two uniforms, bios are for character pages not this page.)

Okay, here's my rundown of your recent edit:
 * I have not seen a character have two entrances. If you have, please link a video or something (because it'd be cool to see).  I know Peach walks in while Mario and DK drop in, but that's not significant evidence to say that there are two entrances per character.  So you probably have other evidence... so I want to know about it!
 * Same thing for Daisy's two uniforms... please give a link!
 * Thank you for addressing the bios. I was second guessing myself while making them in regards to the same issue.  Still, I don't know why you deleted even the information regarding their play styles.  I'll recheck my source (the UK website) and get back to them.
 * Why do we have to wait for names with the Mega Strikes before we tell people what they look like? Look around the Wiki--there are plenty of articles about topics from upcoming games that do not have official names yet, but likely will as time passes.  So, why should we neglect our readers of that?
 * Why did you downgrade the uniform details? Are we referring to the team uniform and not each character's personal uniform?  If that's the case, maybe I'll find a screenshot of each character to go with each bio (the Mega Strikes blur the characters and don't show the whole uniform)
 * One last minor thing, "Signature L symbol with electric flowing around it" You reverted/wrote this in the article. Electric is an adjective, and electricity is a noun, so I think electricity would fit better here.  Or you could say lightning bults or electric bursts or whatever.  It's not a big thing at all.

I'll leave the Character section alone for a while, but please address my issues! ...gah... must not touch the character section... gah... Yeah... maybe I will edit it... who knows.

See you soon! --User:Stumpers

P.S. As a general rule, I find it better to replace rather than delete. This Wiki is about the small details as you know, so it not a good idea to remove information without providing updated info. I know you care about the article and have helped out a lot (remember the Wi-Fi and Mega Strikes?), but you make it hard to work on the article when you're so quick to delete stuff.

New Message
Dang, are you thorough! Glad to have you working on this article! I haven't checked out the opening FMP (I think that's what it's called) yet, because I like to save those for when I actually have the game... so thanks for getting the stills! If it's like that in the opening movie, I'll bet that it's that way in the final game. After all, we haven't seen her in action yet expect for those screens you showed me. Maybe her artwork is wrong?

So, the ground/air entrance thing: I hope you'll forgive me for that. I can't believe I missed it. It seems like the air entrance is a retort entrance to the ground entrance. Like, one player does the ground entrance, and then the other player does an air entrance. A neat little tidbit that supports that every character has an air entrance is that the sidekicks can be seen in both videos pointing towards their incoming captain.

I like having character information on the game pages because it means I can compare the playable characters and not have to check out each of their pages and find the right section to find out the info. And, you'll see that I updated the bios to reflect only information regarding the game... with a little info on their personalities. I justify that because their personalities vary from game to game.

I think that covers just about everything. You rock the house, by the way. I hope to finish the "Second Stumpification" later this week. Maybe it'll have to wait till the weekend, though. Regardless, thanks for all your help and the clarification! --Stumpers

Ahh, no problem no problem. :) User:Fixitup

Mario Party 8 Character Artwork
Hey where is the site that you found the MP8 character artwork?Cause I keep checking other sites and they only have mario,wario,mcballyhoo and I couldnt found the others.

It was on the Nintendo forums, I think he said. Yes... I am a talk page lurker ^_^ --Stumpers

Gooey Bomb
Yeah, there was less than a 2 minute difference between mine, yours, and Sir Grodus's.----

Comment on my User Talk Page
I'm no quite sure what you are saying...


 * Oh thats weird....

Mario Party 6
Yeah, you might be right about the box art. You see, I have the Japanese version of the game, so maybe they're different. I'll look for the American box art. Thanks for pointing that out, though.


 * found it; It's so wierd, though! It's identical to the Japanese version, except Waluigi is gone! That's the only difference. No wonder I was fooled.


 * here it is. (notice the top-right corner... Waluigi.)[[Image:MP6_JapaneseCover.jpg|200px]]

Sorry about that.
As I saw, your voting was a success via PM. When you click on a mailto link, the email that is set as the default opens, which might have been an Outlook Express program you never used. Again, sorry. 15:10, 11 June 2007 (EDT)

Harshness on User talk:Pokemon DP
DP here is still getting the ropes of this wiki. Daisy is a big article. Comments such as those you posted are not welcome here. 19:57, 20 June 2007 (EDT)
 * You've always had this attitude since you came here, and now it had hurt a user's feelings. That's all. 10:54, 21 June 2007 (EDT)

RE: Wow Thanks
I didn't intentionally ruin the page. The picture was deleted, so I thought I was fixing it. Sorry about that:( See ya.

Itadaki Street DS
Don't know wether you want to talk to me or not, but I just want to compliment you on your work on the Itadaki Street DS Official Artwork. You did a really good job on those, I was really impressed. Sorry to bother you, see ya.

No problem, I tought you could use a good compliment from me so we could clear up that little... mishap from before. And your work on the Itadaki Street DS Artwork was really good, so I decided to compliment you on that. Seriously, I could never do that, my computer stinks :P Anyway, good job again, see ya.

Re: Big Eight
I've posted on the main page and am waiting for some feedback. Then, I'm going to create a Proposals based on the information I get on the main page. I'm hoping for it to be moved to the help sections or deleted, if you want to know. But, yeah, I'm hoping for big changes to the Big Eight ;) 18:22, 22 June 2007 (EDT)

UPDATE: Knife put of a vote on the main page regarding the issue, and most people agree that it should be made a guideline. I like that better than flat out deleting it anyway. 18:27, 22 June 2007 (EDT)

Double UPDATE: Wayoshi just moved it to proposals :( 18:31, 22 June 2007 (EDT)