User talk:UhHuhAlrightDaisy

Why do you keep removing the link to Filler Characters on the Big Eight article? It is a note worthy thing thing to know.

It's because I don't think Waluigi and Daisy should be considered filler characters. They might not be apart of the big eight but their more important then filler characters. Infact I'm creating an article about a level inbetween filler and the big eight.User:Fixitup

How about you create the article first and we'll see.

Okay I've created a page for Elite Underdogs and Minor Underdogs, but I don't know how to create that bar/list the says the article name then under it the characters and stuff like that.User:Fixitup

Recent Edits to Princess Daisy
First of all, at this wiki, we prefer to always italicize game titles, and link them the first time mentioned in each article. In addition, some of your sentences are either too short, too long, or don't make much sense. "In Double Dash there was also something highly noticed. It was Daisy's memorable quote 'Hi I'm Daisy'. It's speculated that many haters of this quote aren't even annoyed by it but are just simply reminded of it so much that they dislike it." It's speculated...what? Doesn't make much sense, and I'm not even sure if the quote is important enough to be in the article. "Early videos of MP8 for the Wii show every character from MP7 and it's been confirmed that Blooper and Hammer Bro. are the secret characters but the game is still in early design so no one knows what will be changed about the characters before release." Too long, where's some commas? "In Mario Party 3 Daisy served the same purpose as in Tennis except her tomboyish side shined much larger when she sent Bowser soaring with one mighty punch." In the MP series, whatever happens is mostly based on gameplay, so not necessarily does Daisy's tomboyish side "shine much larger". We appreciate your edits to improve the article, but try to make your sentences clearer. Thanks for reading. 01:27, 2 January 2007 (EST) Oh, and "shone" is better grammar then "shined". =)
 * Maybe I'll change that then. User:Fixitup
 * Ok I'll try to fix some errors then. User: Fixitup
 * I don't think you understand, this happend in the story line movie part which whent with the story and as long as you got to that point the clip always played. It had nothing to do with the person playing really. User: Fixitup
 * Daisy isn't even in the intro Cut-Scean or Story Mode. I Played it Numerous Times and never saw her punch or what-not to Bowser.
 * You are right about her not being in the intro and you're right about her not being in story mode..KINDA! She is in story mode but she isn't playable. User:Fixitup
 * Then where does she beat up Bowser? I use Wario all the time, never ran into her.
 * ...Hmm if I remember correctly you have to go through the badges of whatever and there is a badge for each character you have to fight and Bowser tries to take one of the badges then Daisy beats him away and then you have to fight her for it.
 * Your right! Holy Cow, sorry I mis-judged. Its right after the Stamp of courage or something.
 * No problem, and thank you for checking =). User:Fixitup

Daisy
Ooops, sorry 'bout that. Must've pressed something to make that code. never played Super Mario land, only it's sequels. Added it though.

Dasiy Article
When I have a large amount of spare time, I will review the Daisy article and give my evaluation. I don't have a lot of free time this week, but I will try to get it done by Saturday. I hope this works for you. I'm sorry if otherwise. -- Son of Suns


 * Okay. I placed my second review in the Daisy nomination page. -- Son of Suns

Some confusion. User:Fixitup
 * 1. Ok
 * 2. Ok
 * 3. This doesn't make sense to me. Why would a section about her appearing in minor games include what she does in every game?
 * 4. Ok but what doyou mean by removal of all "you"s
 * 5. So you're saying they should just be moved right?
 * 6. I thought I already explained that she bribed him for the badge, you can't get to much more descriptive then that.
 * 7. It was rewritten it was just done in the same way but I could put it in paragraph form. And as for physical appearance and traits does that just mean her strength and abilities? Im confused on that..
 * 8. Sure thing.
 * 9. Ill try.
 * 10. So you want it to stay with the descriptions of video games like in the beggining, then go to minor game appearances and then different paragraphs about how she looked in certain games?

Response:

3. What I mean is; can you put a very brief description of what she does in these minor games? Don't go into super detail. We just need to know her function (does she save the game, does she give hints, does she caddy for Luigi, etc.) 4. The Super Mario Wiki is a pseudo-formal encyclopedia. The use of the second-person, such as "you" and "your", is seen as very poor writing. Instead of writing "you", you should write Princess Daisy (if the article talks about what Daisy is doing, even if the player is controlling her, as you are not in the game itself) or "the player(s)", if the article is describing something the person playing the game specifically has to do (like press the "A" button). 5. Either move items regarding what I listed to the appropriate section or delete it from the article if it is already mentioned in that section. There is some overlap that needs to be trimmed. 6. The problem is "bribed" does not necesarrily mean "seductive". Wario can bribe characters with a lot of cash, but he's not seductive because of that. What did Daisy do that was seductive? Did she wink at him, flirt with him, give him a kiss, lift up her dress and show off her toned legs? Where is the seduction in the bribe? 7. Physical Appearance and Traits is what Daisy looks like, what she wears, traits about her that aren't powers, abilities, or personality. This doesn't have to be too long (check out the Yoshi article). A lot of this is in the appearance section I believe. 10. I goofed on that last one. The article should have in-universe video game info first (such as Biography, Personality, Powers and Abilities, etc.) then move to out-of-universe video game info, such as appearance development, as well as other minor video game info, then move to depictions in other media at the very end.

Hope this helps! -- Son of Suns

Ow my hands:

Okie dokie, I've done quite a bit of stuff and was wandering if you could tell me what I've completed out of your stuff. User:Fixitup

Party 8 Story
What is the source of the story of Mario Party 8? Sounds interesting!

Nintendo Press Room I think. User:Fixitup

Daisy FA
I'll give my evaluation ASAP. Maybe even tonight! -- Son of Suns

Thank you! User:Fixitup

Sorry if I wasn't paying attention to the progress of Daisy. However, in the FA rules it states that "Supporters are expected to help fix the problems pointed out by objectors and contact them to reevaluate the article." If you feel the article is complete don't hesitate to ask for a re-evaluation. -- Son of Suns

Will do. User:Fixitup

Okay. Basically the Powers and Abilities section needs to be completely rewritten - we don't need the full description of every single move, just the name and the general traits of the move. Also, a lot of game titles need to be italicized. Other than that, this article is looking pretty good. -- Son of Suns

Thanks, I'll do my best to fix that. User:Fixitup