MarioWiki:Featured articles/Unfeature/N2/Baby Peach

Remove Featured Article Status

 * 1) While this article does a better job at providing information on Partners in Time than Baby Luigi, it still has past tense littered all over the place. Also, information for Super Mario Kun is nowhere to be found, and I'm sure that she appeared in the manga. Until we can get enough information about Baby Peach's appearance in the manga, the history section is incomplete, and we need to unfeature it.
 * 2) Written in the wrong tense.
 * 3) Per all.
 * 4) Per all
 * 5) Per all

Keep Featured Article Status

 * 1) I fixed tense. I also added to the Yoshi's Island DS section, Characteristics (descriptions), I've also added everything I know about Super Mario-Kun into the page. The improvements have made a difference, to me.

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I completely rewrote the article for verb tense, so that issue is taken care of. I can't fix the rewrite-and-expand tag though, since I know nothing about M&L.

Don't forget Super Mario-Kun. That can't be disregarded.


 * Any evidence of Baby Peach's appearance in the Super Mario-Kun series; I need to investigate this further -- and if it's true, I can't believe that it would get overlooked. I'll also address this on the related article's talkpage.
 * She appeared in the Partners in Time one. I judged it by the cover and she's there in the cover.