MarioWiki:Featured articles/Unfeature/N2/Beldam

Remove Featured Article Status

 * 1) There ia a rewrite template. The trivia section is very large and has poor elements (e.i The Magic of Oz thing) and there are some words in oast tense that should be in present.
 * 2) My god, that history section.
 * 3) With a history section like that, I find it hard to believe this was actually successfully featured.
 * 4) Per Ashley and Red.
 * 5) Per Mario and Icemario. A history section like that scares me, it's so undetailed!

Keep Featured Article Status

 * 1) I've been waiting to do this for awhile, and I finally can now that the history section has been cleaned up. Any more issues that you have, tell me and I'll try to clean up.
 * 2) This is an excellent article. It has a detailed history section, there is a lot of information on her, and it has a nice appearance.

Removal of Support/Oppose Votes
EpicRosalina and Mario7
 * 1) @EpicRosalina, if you do it I may remove my vote. @Mario7: this isn't great, the story section is messed up and VERY detailed, this needs an trim. Also, are you blind???There is a rewrite template!!!!FA's can't have it.
 * 2) The article Įstill has some very glaring flaws, as mentioned by Icemario. It is certainly far from being an excellent article. Remember, quality over quantity, and less can be more.
 * 3) Per all.
 * 4) It's still a hideously padded article.
 * 5) Seriously? Their is a freaking rewrite template on that page. Per all.
 * 6) Per all

Comments
@Epic Rosalina: What's been done was the tip of the iceberg; the article still reeks of flowery writing, still really needs some serious trimming, there's one instance of the writing looking personal and there are still several cases of misused tenses.

Will somebody PLEASE fix any issues that are left? I fixed what I could and I think it looks fine.

Excuse me, but I am STILL waiting for an answer, an if you look, I actually REWROTE some of the page, but you guys keep ignoring me.
 * I will look into it when I get the time

Good job on the trivia @EpicRosa, but her story section is still awful. And I think that there is no neex for this "Profile and Statics" section. But I will remove my support if anyone do it.

I've MASSIVELY trimmed down the story section, so hopefully, you are happy the way it looks now.