MarioWiki:Featured articles/N2/King Boo

Oppose

 * 1) Some sections are amazing (like the Luigi's Mansion Section) and others are poor (like the Mario Kart DS and Mario and Sonic at the London 2012 Olympic Games). The Mario Kart DS section is horribly written and the Mario and Sonic at the London 2012 Olympic Games section is too short.
 * No, I think the Luigi's Mansion section is the one that needs a major rewrite. It feels too much like a romanticized heroic epic. There are way too many biased adjectives, such as "green-clad plumber", "magical", "incredible", "right-hand", "hulking beast", and so much more. The tense is not consistent and some sections in the Trivia can be either removed or relocated in the article.

Comments
Just saying, you don't use N1 for making nominations. N1 is used for archives. If there is already a created page for it (most likely a redirect), put the active nomination in it. It has N instead.

I added a rewrite template shortly after making my oppose vote. This template is used after the nomination is created, so saying stuff like, "lolz u didnt c teh temp plate so y u nomin8 it" is not valid.