User talk:Xzelion/Story Archive

This where evryone can write reviews and comments, Thanks ahead of time for the reviews and commets.

Reviews/Comments/Issue1
Awesome!---- awesome! What's sorta ironic... I do watch the sunset and eat Vinilla Ice Cream, and I'm freinds with HK

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That story is supreme in every way I can think of!!!! The plot, dialogue and descriptions were amazing! The only thing that was confusing was that who was speaking was sometimes unclear (you probably forgot that in this Wiki, you have to press enter twice). There were some typos, but who cares aobut that anyway. Wow, and I'm one of the main characters, was it because I welcomed you? I hope SPL can overcome his fear to save me.... I rate it 50/10 :') (crying of joy because of the great story)

Great, great, great, great story.Plumber pretty much summed up the good and bad of your fanfic. Can I be in it? User:Gofer

Reviews/Comments/Issue2
Even better, plus ME!----