MarioWiki:Featured articles/Unfeature/N1/Smithy

Remove Featured Article Status

 * 1) To put it bluntly, the writing is abominable. Read the opening paragraph. "Smithy creates mechanical monsters to be unleashed against the peaceful people of other worlds." It doesn't stop there. This type of writing is everywhere in this article. "Smithy calmly asks Mario to turn over his Star Pieces, and when Mario refuses, an epic battle commences." I'll let these few examples speak for themselves. But, our wiki does not allow this type of writing, especially in a featured article.
 * Ah, the relics of the past, chock full of writing that's more at home in a Shakespeare play then in a wiki. Per LGM.
 * 1) Per all.
 * 2) Per all.

Keep Featured Article Status

 * 1) Hey, that's the kind of flaw you OVERLOOK!!!!!!!!

Removal of Support/Oppose Votes
FireWario
 * Um, FireWario, why do you think this article should remain featured? You didn't mention any particular reason you think it should stay featured.
 * 1) Per LGM, plus what he said doesn't make sense. (possible fan vote?)
 * 2) you don't overlook any flaws with fa's

Comments
I removed some of the bad writing, but I don't think I got it all

Instead of trying to unfeature everything why don't you try to fix it? That would be far more helpful. -- 16:23, 23 March 2013 (EDT)
 * I have other things to do. I really want this rewritten, but I can't have it like this. Besides, unfeaturing nominations is another way of improving an article, by bringing awareness.