User talk:SliverEmperor

Your writing
Hi. While I appreciate your effort in trying to write articles in the wiki, keep in mind that we are an encyclopedia, not a story. We tell facts in the most straightforward manner possible, and some of your writing aren't up to wiki standards. Keep the writing to a non-biased, straightforward point of view and avoid adjectives, adverbs, and other flowery descriptions when it comes to writing, especially if they serve no purpose but to pad out the writing. 23:22, 4 March 2014 (EST)