MarioWiki:Featured articles/N1/Thwomp

Support

 * 1) After tons of work after nominating this, all content, grammar, and pictures are great, which is why this needs to be a featured article.

Oppose

 * 1) It seems to be lacking information
 * 2) There are many one liners. For example, Mario Pinball Land could say what they done, the Mario Kart series could say where they appeared and sometimes what they do (except Mario Kart Wii, for some odd reason), Mario & Luigi could use images, and Mario vs. Donkey Kong could use more pictures and more info. Other than these mistakes the article is decent.
 * 3) Per above
 * 4) Tense
 * 5) Per New Super Mario, add pictures and more information for the Mario Party and Mario & Luigi games and I'll change my vote
 * 6) The Mario Pinball Land section doesn't give any info about Thwomps, it just tells readers how to beat the boss. This isn't a cheat website, it's a wiki. Big difference. The image under the Mario Party 3 section is also pretty bad quality
 * 7) It was great but I felt like it was talking about Thwomp Sub-Species more then the actual thing! They do have there own pages you know! The Mario Pinball Land section was also going off-topic!
 * 8) The Mario Party 9 section needs updated, and the Mario Pinball Land section is a little off-topic.
 * 9) Per all.
 * 10) Per all.

Comments
They don't appear in Yoshi's Cookie...
 * according to the article they do quote from the article Regardless of the difficulty, the final two stages offer the same opponents, though their skill differs between each difficulty. Stage 6 lets the player face off against Thwomp, followed by Magikoopa. Stage 7 is a best-three-out-of-five match against Bowser himself.

Featured Articles that can be fixed in about 1 edit can still be featured. Adding a Yoshi's Cookie section can be done in 1 edit only due to the fact they make a very minor appearance in the game. Oh and can you please tell me where they appear in MKAGP2? Also, expanding the MVD section can be done in 1 edit.
 * So do it and i can only tell you what the templates say and according to this template Thwomps appear as a character item, also featured articles must be perfect and must have every appearance listed in detail and i'd be willing to be thwomps appear in the super mario kun manga as well as the nintendo adventure books
 * Yep they do appear in the Nintendo adventure books and this is just the first one i could find that had a full list of enemies
 * Then I'll expand it just for you GS15.

It doesn't matter if you can fix the article in one edit. You can fix everything in any article in one edit. FAs have to be perfect (although sometimes there are small grammar errors that become unnoticed).


 * Did the story info...
 * I read the info and it doesn't say what role Thwomps played and by that i mean what Thwomps did

Can you please tell me where you found out that Thwomps are in SPP?
 * The Super Princess Peach article there also in the template and category for SPP
 * SPP added.
 * Once again where does it appear and can you defeat it neither of those things are in the article and they should be

Ok I think I pretty much got everything...

@New Super Mario Where is it lacking information? I added a lot more information last night.


 * And yet it's still missing info


 * Added MKAGP2, no more missing info.
 * Yes there is you've given almost no detail on what thwomp's do as an item and theres not detail on Thwomps appearances in the Super Mario Kun Manga as well as no real info on there appearances in the Nintendo adventure books and no info on Yoshi's Cookie either everything must be there and in detail before i remove my oppose vote

Can you tell me where you found out they appear in Mario Kun? And yes, there is a Nintendo Adventure Books section, and I just added Yoshi's Cookie.
 * They appear in at least one Mario Kun Manga since it's based off of Mario and Luigi Partners and time a game which Thwomps played a sizable role in. also your still lacking info in the Nintendo Adventure Books section cause it doesnt tell me what they did just that they appeared. Also the Mario Golf Section needs some work and so does the Mario Kart GP2 section


 * Almost done. Now just on Kun and more on MKAGP2.
 * Super Mario Adventures comic is also missing

Did SMA.


 * Did I get everything you wanted?
 * No you didnt detail what Thwomps do as an item


 * Is that all I need to do?
 * I think so but i'm not good with tense or images so i don't know but content wise i think your good

It's getting really hard though cause I can't find any information of what the Thwomp does...
 * FINALLY FINISHED!!
 * You're kidding, riiiiight? Finished? There are more one-liners then I can count in here. Just because the article says they appear in Yoshi's Cookie doesn't mean they actually do, I have yet to see anything suggesting they actually appear in that game. You have lists for notable members and subspecies listed TWICE(Once incomplete), and I thought that Whomps were related to Thwomps, not a subspecies. I regret to inform you that this article is far from what you suggest.