MarioWiki:Featured articles/Unfeature/N2/Mario Super Sluggers

Remove featured article status

 * 1) Though the rest of the article is a masterpiece, there are two big problems which are glaringly obvious. The first one is especially obnoxious: the "Challenge Mode Cutscenes" section. That section is cluttered, with way too excessive detail and littered flowery and/or otherwise unnecessary descriptions. That aside, the second problem comes from the reception/sales section; rather, the lack thereof. Yeah. There is literally no critical reception section in the entire article. That being said, I think this article needs to be unfeatured for the problems mentioned.
 * 2) I'd say it's a little rough to base an entire unfeature nomination on a single section which, while badly written, can be easily fixed and in a short amount of time. But I'm too busy to do that now so per Toadette.
 * 3) Per all

Keep featured article status

 * 1) I fixed the first problem by rewriting parts of the sections that were cluttered, but I'm not too sure if I can get to the second problem. Still, I think this article should be featured because even though there's a lack of critical reception, this article meets all the other requirements. There's no improvement tags, no red links, has lots of info describing every single character in the game, gives a detailed description of the stadiums and the game's modes, etc.
 * 2) The article seems to be in great condition, and the game it great itself, being one of the greatest games of all time, and should keep its status as a featured article.

Removal of support/oppose votes
Johnson T. Shy Guy
 * 1) The first part of your vote is valid, but the second part looks fan based. You might want to alter your vote.
 * 2) Your vote isn't specific enough. The quality of the game itself is also irrelevant.

Mari0fan100
 * 1) The changes you made hardly improved upon the problem addressed in the nomination, and if anything made it worse. "Get" (as in "gets frozen") is an overused term, when "turn" is a perfectly acceptable word, and "super" (as in "super high") is colloquial when used as an adverb. An FA is also supposed to meet all of the requirements.

Comments
Just two examples, but the thing is, this is the whole section. 19:33, 28 November 2018 (EST)