MarioWiki:Featured articles/Unfeature/N2/Dimentio

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 * 1) Simply put, the writing is abominable. It tries far, far, far too hard to be like a synopsis for a story and not an article for a wiki. This should definitely not be the case. Our articles are meant to inform people, and this article isn't able to inform with all of the unnecessarily fancy wording that jumbles the actual information. Let me just quote some of the absolute worst ones: "He learns that Bleck has an emotional side, and this could be used as a weakness to make it easier for the heroes to defeat him", "He needs a time and place, however, where this deception wouldn't be discovered", "The Pure Heart Mario acquired in this land is powerless against the destruction, but it could be repaired in the Underwhere", and plenty of others. I'm not saying that the article has to be "Dimentio did this and then did that, the end", but the way it is now, it's just too overly gaudy to be able to represent "the best of the best that the Super Mario Wiki has produced".
 * 2) - Per the wall of text above.
 * 3) This is why I put a rewrite template on Count Bleck's article, which is suffering the same fate as this article.
 * 4) Per GD.
 * 5) Per GreenDisaster.
 * 6) Per GreenDisaster.
 * 7) Per all. This article could basically be alternatively titled "Super Paper Mario" considering the content.