MarioWiki:Featured articles/Unfeature/N1/Tabuu

Remove Featured Article Status

 * 1) First, let me say something; this article is big. The thing is, this article is too big. I mean, this article is as big as Bowser Jr.'s article, and Tabuu has only appeared in one game! A large chunk of the parargraphs don't even mention Tabuu, and the whole article is pretty much just the entire plot of Adventure Mode. In other words, it really needs to be trimmed down to only show what Tabuu does.
 * 2) Major clean up is required for this article. Also, it's written more like a story than something that is supposed to give information. I suggest we cut down all the flowery adjectives/adverbs and make it sound more like an encyclopedia than a story.
 * 3) Look, I cannot read through this article in one sitting. Some sections are utterly littered with walls and walls of text. Also, when I read an article on Tabuu, I expect it to be a dry summary of his history like in an encyclopedia, not a colorful story. Besides, there are two rewrite tags. Everything is in the past tense. The other rewrite tag is probably pertaining to the style of the article's writing. Unless we get more images, more dry information, and most things in present tense, this article is not the best I've seen.
 * 4) Per all. We need to work a lot on this article.

Comments
@Mario Fan:My point is that the article has a large amount of unnecessary information, and would really benefit from a trimmed article.
 * Well, it just needs a cleanup. You guys always say "we are going to unfeature it because we are too lazy to make a cleanup". Why don't you stop talking and begin doing things? No offense, but that's the sad truth. --
 * If an article has an improvement template, then it can't be a featured article. Also, I suck at cleanup. If I bring attention to the need of cleanup, then someone else will do it. Also also, are you seriously callling me lazy? Just because I said this needed to be rewrited?