MarioWiki:Featured articles/N1/Mario Party DS

Support

 * 1) Great quality images, I fixed any bias or bad writing, and overall, a perfect candidate for featuring.

Oppose

 * 1)  You need to fill in empty sections per Empty Section Policy. It may also need a small gameplay section, although it plays similarly to the previous games, so that's why I said "small". It's nothing too deep or difficult. Then, I'll look into it.
 * 2) Per LeftyGreenMario.
 * 3) At the current moment I feel it does have a few too many red links, yes they're not scattered around the page, but I still think there are too many. But seeing as Ice has the game, this will probably be fixed shortly and my oppose shall go.

Comments
I'm also planning to include a table with a brief description for each space, but I don't know if you're doing this as well, so let me know if you need anything, okay?

I filled in the empty sections that could be fixed, but the beta elements and staff I don't know how to deal with that.
 * Take some cues from Super Mario Galaxy's article.

The Story section isn't that well-written, so I'll try and rewrite it.
 * True. Too much loaded words.

I've dealt with the remaining empty sections the same way I've seen them dealt with on other pages, so that should take care of the whole empty section problem. All that may be left to do is the addition of a brief Gameplay section.
 * Copying random content from the target page (like done with the staff section) is not really the ideal, even for something as simple as staff listing. Super Mario World and WarioWare: Smooth Moves are examples of How You Can Do It. --Glowsquid (talk) 08:36, 10 November 2013 (EST)

Randombob-omb4761, there is really no point in simply perring my vote; I have plans to work on this article, so my vote is subject to change and even get removed, which means YOUR vote may be subject to this as well.

I've added the Gameplay section and skimmed through the whole article to rewrite it, and apart from several red links in the Modes section, everything seems to have been taken care of.
 * Oh, thanks. Let me slash out my vote, and if no other action is taken from Randombob-omb4761, then feel free to remove my and that person's vote.

I have the game as well; I haven't played it in a while, though.
 * I only mentioned Ice because I 100% know that he has the game, but still the problem should be easily fixed.