MarioWiki:Featured articles/Unfeature/N2/Beldam

Remove Featured Article Status

 * 1) There ia a rewrite template. The trivia section is very large and has poor elements (e.i The Magic of Oz thing) and there are some words in oast tense that should be in present.
 * 2) My god, that history section.
 * 3) With a history section like that, I find it hard to believe this was actually successfully featured.

Keep Featured Article Status

 * 1) I've been waiting to do this for awhile, and I finally can now that the history section has been cleaned up. Any more issues that you have, tell me and I'll try to clean up.

Comments
@Epic Rosalina: What's been done was the tip of the iceberg; the article still reeks of flowery writing, still really needs some serious trimming, there's one instance of the writing looking personal and there are still several cases of misused tenses.