MarioWiki:Featured articles/N1/Bramble Scramble

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 * 1) This article is of good length, no redlinks, to my knowledge there are no errors, many images, everything needed for an FA.

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Just shorten the paragraphs a little bit.

Oh... this wasn't ready to become a FA...

LeftyGreenMario:I was trying to find some grammar errors but I coudn't. Could you just point one out for me?

I don't know if there were any grammar errors either, but I'm sure there were tense errors. That was my fault, I wrote pretty much the whole article :p I don't have the ability to keep everything in present-tense.

EDIT: I fixed all the errors I could find. I think the article is just about fine now, but I can't think of any way to shorten the paragraphs. I want the layout of the levels to be specific, so people know what obstacles and stuff are in the stage.

There are a lot of future tenses in this article. It should be written in present tense.

Didn't I fix them? It should be in present tense now.

It humored me that several users were trying to remove mine and KS3's votes, but there wasn't even a Removal heading. (I've added it in now)
 * Someone deleted it by accident. But really, what's wrong with the article now?