MarioWiki:Featured articles/N1/Ashley and Red

Support

 * 1) My artcile (and of Red) looks good. I didn't see any issues.

Oppose

 * 1) Per Glowsquid in the comments.
 * 2) Per Yoshi876. Featured Articles MUST be at 9000 bytes to be featured. This article is at 8444 bytes. Please expand this, or else this won't be featured AT ALL.
 * 3) see comments.

Removal of Opposes
Pinkie Pie, Yoshi876 and Golwsquid
 * 1) I did the requirements of you 3. And Glowsquid, the beggining of the article looks good in now and i fixed the Touched and Game & Wario issues. :)

Comments
I am OK with your opposes....But, exceot the size, the article looks good to you all?

The article has several obvious problems;
 * The introduction is a single clunky block of text. While most of the information is relevant, stuff like Ashley's age and "backstory" is not material that needs to be mentioned in the intro and could be spun off in their own section or integrated in the rest of the article. Chopped it down to a size I think is decent.
 * The WW Touched section is extremely short, lacking several details about the stage's "storyline".
 * The G&W section barely describes the Ashley minigame.
 * Hokey writing in spots ("Red clearly survives whatever perils Ashley puts him under," lol, what?).

You can probably push the article over the minimum recommended 9.000 bytes by expanding the lacking sections --Glowsquid (talk) 19:37, 17 February 2014 (EST)
 * OK, I fixed these things except of:


 * Beggining if the Article: Looks good in this way, and I don't kniw what put :P
 * Game & Wario's section: I don't have Wii U, and never okayed the game.
 * Anyone who played Game & Wario wanna help?
 * What it looks now??