MarioWiki:Featured articles/N2/Shadow Queen

Support

 * 1) I worked hard on it, also the article looks good. There aren't any  major  grammar issues

Oppose

 * 1) The intro section is short, I'll try expanding it after I do some research since I don't have PMTTYD.
 * 2) Similarly to Baby Donkey Kong, the whole article feels... bare. Also, the History section often puts away focus from the Shadow Queen to give exposition or details, which shouldn't be the case since this is an article about the Shadow Queen. The first part of the Personality section gets a bit too flowery ("ruthless and humorless"?), and this kind of writing pops up a bit too much throughout the article for me to be comfortable with calling this an FA, even regardless of its bareness.