User talk:92.191.147.196

Writing
Hello. A number of things regarding this edit: 10:15, 15 August 2018 (EDT)
 * Please try to write in correct grammar (including spaces after punctuation) and avoid . One long sentence with several commas in between as in the edit in question is not good grammar, and should be separated appropriately into shorter, comprehensible sentences with periods/full stops.
 * Avoid writing in second-person (i.e. the word "you"); instead, use "the player", or the character's name.