User talk:Pizza loving 1

Capitalization
Please remember to capitalize your edits. Thanks, TheDarkStar (talk) 18:05, 27 February 2019 (EST)
 * This applies to the start of sentences, section headers, and proper names. Also, avoid using "you", instead using a character name or "the player". 18:13, 27 February 2019 (EST)
 * Also, please remember to not use contractions in things that are not things such as quotes, so for example "can't" should be "cannot".   18:15, 27 February 2019 (EST)
 * Also, character names should be capitalized along with the first word of each sentence. TheDarkStar (talk) 17:57, March 25, 2019 (EDT)

Grammar
Try to take better care in your grammar when editing. Looking at this edit as an example, the sentence you added at the end here: "Luigi has to enter the Terrace at the start of the mission to see King Boo open the paranormal portal, then defeat a huge horde of ghosts here at the end to save his dimension from collapsing, the portal is seen but cannot be entered." is grammatically incorrect, as this forms a. In cases like this, you need to start a new sentence or use a semicolon or conjunction, not join it with the previous sentence using a comma.

e.g.

"''Luigi has to enter the Terrace at the start of the mission to see King Boo open the paranormal portal, then defeat a huge horde of ghosts here at the end to save his dimension from collapsing. The portal is seen but cannot be entered."

Also, when naming titles like, please remember to italicise them so it's formatted Luigi's Mansion 3, not Luigi's Mansion 3 (see Manual of Style, though I recommend giving the whole page a read). Thanks and keep contributing. 22:14, 27 February 2019 (EST)

Additionally, try to avoid incorporating subjectivity and informal language in your edits, such as words like "strangely" and "somehow". They should be kept professional and in an encyclopedic tone. 23:22, 27 February 2019 (EST)

Numbers
Hello, please note that small numbers should be fully spelt so for example four should be spelt as four, not 4. Thanks! 17:23, 28 February 2019 (EST)

Signature
Please remember to sign your posts on talk pages with 4 tildes. A tilde looks like this ~. TheDarkStar (talk) 17:43, 1 March 2019 (EST)

Corrections
i can do whatever i want, and besides i'm new, so cut me some slack. Pizza loving 1
 * That's not how that works. And it's because you're new that someone is trying to help you. 17:49, 1 March 2019 (EST)