User talk:Jaznorph

Just a Friendly Reminder :)
Hello, there were just some things that I noticed about an edit you made to this article a few hours ago. First, when editing an article, you don't want to refer to the reader directly; i.e., instead of saying "you," say "the player." Also, you should avoid putting things like "(I found the both of them myself! ;) )" directly in the article. It's okay to put things like this in the comments section when making an edit, just not in the actual article. Other than these two things, there was nothing wrong with the edit you made, just try to keep these things in mind when making any future edits to articles. :)

02:15, 23 March 2011 (EDT)


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