MarioWiki:Featured articles/Unfeature/N1/Baby Luigi

Remove Featured Article Status

 * 1) This article looks good at a first glance, but if one looks closer, some problems are visible. First is the rather informal writing style and inconsistent verb tenses. No, what concerns me the most is the Partners in Time section. That section is awfully short; it needs more details about the game and an overall expansion. Also, until we write an adequate section about his appearance in the Super Mario Kun manga, the article is incomplete, and that is enough for unfeaturing.

Keep Featured Article Status

 * 1) I proof-read the article, corrected verb/informal tenses the most I can, wrote the Pitty story where Baby Luigi is involved in (which is basically the entire thing XP) though I could have created new errors, added the Super Mario Kun section, and added some information in other sections. I corrected most of the errors in the article that you mentioned, so this should stay featured.

Comments
Uh-oh, you gave me work to do on this article. Time. I'll try fixing everything I can.

Just expand the informal contractions and I will be happy.
 * There's only, like, 2 nonquoted contractions in the entire article. Fix'd too.


 * Okay, don't vote to remove my vote. I will request for a deletion.
 * You're not allowed to delete it yourself?
 * Well, I'm pretty sure I cannot delete pages. I can only blank them.
 * Oh, right. I forgot about this page and was just thinking of the unfeature template on the article. :/