User talk:Alpheta

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Pikmin
You're the same Alpheta from Pikipedia aren't you! It's nice to see someone milidly knowable instead of total strangers.

Question
Hi from http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon2_sprites/006.png C mario  17.

What do you not like about Super Paper Mario? It's not my favorite game, there are things I don't like about it...but why is it specifically excluded?

Oh...Yeah, I liked the turn-based fighting, too. Hey, I'd be interested to see the game you came up with...That has to be a bit of work! http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon2_sprites/006.png C mario  17   Also, do you want to be friends?

OK. I can't wait! http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon2_sprites/006.png C mario  17

I like it! You should also add some pictures that would show key parts of the plot, and as well as what the characters look like (Mario is obvious, but the Paper Mario series tends to add creative/imaginative characters.) Just one question: How does Mario get the book? http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon2_sprites/006.png Cmario 17 Once again, great job!

I read it over again and realized that (so far) it is very similar to Paper Mario: The Thousand-Year Door; I'm guessing that it's your favorite Paper Mario game? http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon2_sprites/006.png Cmario 17


 * There are 7 Light Stars, as there was 7 Crystal Stars
 * Founder's Town has Founder's Underground, where Rougeport had Rougeport Sewers
 * Mario almost immediately meets his first partner, a Goomba (Goombill is a Goomba, right?)
 * Both are led by a map.
 * Senator Slug replaces Lord Crump or Gus, I don't know which.
 * The Light Pillar is a single place to bring the Light Stars (I'm guessing on this one), as all the Crystal Stars were brought to the Thousand-Year Door
 * Mario must also head East to get to Petalburg.
 * Both main evil-doers are spirits.

I'm not accusing you of copying it and changing a couple names, I just saw it as your inspiration.

No, I have actually NEVER played it, but I really want to, I can't, however because I don't have an N64. (That's why it isn't on my Wanted Games list.) http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon2_sprites/006.png Cmario 17

Yeah, I read it and thought of Koops in Hooktai Castle, except while the Castle had a small jail, this was a big jail: Imaginative boss, I could NOT say that there's been a warden boss yet (at least I haven't heard of one). I'm amazed 'Koomer' isn't already a character... the name just flows great (and with so many Koopas...) You did a GREAT job on this chapter. I wait for the adventures in Circuit City! (Beware of Glitzville sim.) Your friend http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon2_sprites/006.png Cmario 17.

What I meant by Glitzville sim is a Glitzville similarity: Glitzville is a floating city that uses a lot of electricity! About the e-mail address: I have two, one that only seems to collect spam (I only check that once a week) and another that I use more than once a day. I would give you the second one, but I feel that it reveals personal information. So, the first's address is cmario17@yahoo.com, I will check my messages often today until I get an e-mail from you. Type 'Alpheta' as the subject and then I will send you my second e-mail address via e-mail.

Chapter 2: No complaints. You found all the similarities I did, so it seemed intentional and more classic. Excellent job! http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon2_sprites/006.png Cmario 17

Re: Help
Take away the |} at the end of your userboxes and replace it with.
 * For userbox top, use this coding
 * All I can suggest now is removing all the enters between codings.
 * I see where you went wrong try typing

Paper Mario
I see that you have written Chapter 3; I must say that turning Mario into a vampire is new (usually its only a close call) - Why not put a picture of Vampire Mario in (if it looks any different) DON'T FORGET PICTURES! Also, that is one impressively tall Userbox Tower. http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites/dungeon2_sprites/006.png Cmario 17

PM:TSA
I see you made a paper mario story. Anyways, type this in, User:Alpheta/Paper Mario: The Shadow Auroua and then cut the story from your user page and paste it on that page. Tell everyone about the new page and then just update that page.

Hope this helps because these always end up getting read more.

M64fan

P.S check up Wiki Adventure. It's basically my story except it's just a story, Not a game.