MarioWiki:Featured articles/Unfeature/N2/Rawk Hawk

Remove featured article status

 * 1) The intro paragraph is literally two sentences long. Both the Background and Powers and Abilities sections suffer the same issues of brevity, and the section covering TTYD covers far more than necessary while not being particularly well-written (beyond the tense issues, the article wrings as much fluff as it can out of every moment, which is to the article's detriment). Even if the writing was polished, there isn't much to be said about the character; there isn't enough content here to actually justify touting it as one of the wiki's best.
 * 2) Per Time Turner
 * 3) Per both. Let's get rid of it.
 * 4) One time characters are certainly difficult to write a good article on, as there really isn't much to go off of. Unfortunately, Rawk's is one such article.
 * 5) Per all

Keep featured article status

 * 1) This article explains Rawk Hawk's traits perfectly and has a lot of information on him, no section of the article needs to be rewritten either so I don't see anything wrong in having it featured.

Removal of support/oppose votes
The RPG Gamer
 * 1) The oppose vote only addresses the issue of poor writing, although it only claims that it doesn't need to be rewritten despite it not having changed this entire time. It does not address the issue of brevity and the issue of fluff.