User talk:208.104.68.116
MarioWiki:Good writing[edit]
Please read over the linked page, as a lot of your edits use flowery or casual writing. Specifically, don't use exclamation points and fancy, informal or colloquial phrases (e.g. "but it's too late"). Also, avoid using the word "you" and writing directly to the reader; we write in third-person, so "the player" or the character's name should be used instead. 
Mario JC 21:45, August 20, 2022 (EDT)
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