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 * 1) I wouldn't call this article "flowery writing". Sure, maybe it has some Captain Obvious points (which I fixed) but it's all objective and straight to the point: I don't see any padding. I don't see the bad writing either; your point about "too many dots where it shouldn't be"? Do you mean periods or bullet points? Your points are very vague and I just don't see any problem with this article. Of course I wrote most of this....................so I might be a bit biased about it.
 * 2) Per Baby Luigi, I wouldn't call that writing flowery.

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Also in the reception section Joao mispelled. The correct is .João. I know it 'cause this is my name :P
 * If you read the source, that's where I got the name from. There's no accent in the name for some reason in the source. 21:20, 20 May 2014 (EDT)