MarioWiki:Featured articles/Unfeature/N1/Rawk Hawk

Remove Featured Article Status

 * 1) The article looks good, but there is a rule that says that articles must be in present tense, this one is in past.

Keep Featured Article Status

 * 1) Problems are now fixed.
 * 2) I rewrote the article and removed "after that."

Comments
If you do that I will remove my support

I fixed it, but could someone try removing several instances where "after that" is used?
 * You can use this expression when saying things that hapened afterthe last one. Ah and my support slashed

Well, the history section seems a bit... ahem... beefy. You know, that 17 paragraph essay on Baby Luigi's Partners in Time article? Does this fall under the same category?

Epic Rosalina, you can cut out more. I'll try cutting the history section even more.