MarioWiki:Featured articles/N1/Clockwork Ruins Galaxy

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 * 1) - I, along with others, worked very hard on this article. It is very well written and comes complete with plenty of pictures.

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My only problem with the article is that some parts seem to be written in future tense (use the word "will"). It should all be in present tense.


 * Done. The article had a few imperatives, too many badly written sentences, and way too many pronoun disagreement. Fortunately, they are gone.
 * I don't really think you "fixed" pronoun agreement. Some people may think that the former pronoun-antecedent is correct. Plus, "he or she" is super rambly. I suggest you either revise it to make "player" to "players" or changing "player" to "Mario/Luigi, Mario or Luigi" so we don't get to this type of argument.