MarioWiki:Featured Articles/N/Ludwig von Koopa

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Ludwig von Koopa was nominated at 18:11, 11 May 2008.

[edit] Ludwig von Koopa

[edit] Support

1. F gNice description of an article.
2. Hemu the

Eleven Year Old prodigy

It tells what he did and his role in those games.

[edit] Oppose

1. InfectedShroom. The last four sections under the "Biography" header should be expanded.
2. <<< Knife, you're a Featured Articles/N/Ludwig von Koopa 16:20, 2 June 2008 (EDT)His biography sections could use one or two images, other than that, it seems fine.
3. MelissaMarioSister This article, like just about all the articles on the Koopalings, contains details from the Lemmy's Land fanon, such as, in this case, Ludwig's "official" personality. I will not change my vote until this is fixed.
4. Walkazo - There needs to be a bit more distinction between information derriving from different media in the later sections (about physical appearance, etc.).
5. Stumpers (Talk) - The Appearances in Other Media section needs to be expanded greatly and the stories explained more. For example, there is no mention of Adventures of Super Mario Bros. 3 taking place after the game or Super Mario World cartoon taking place after Super Mario World the game. The personality section also has speculation.

[edit] Comments

Er...couldn't that Yoshi's Safari section be longer? I don't know; I never played it. Stooben Rooben 18:15, 11 May 2008 (EDT)

If someone can prove to me that the Hotel Mario, Yoshi's Safari, and Mario is Missing! sections cannot be expanded, I will revise my vote, as I never played those games. ;) InfectedShroom.

Um, shouldn't the opening section be longer? It's only 3-4 sentences while someone like Dimentio has a LONG paragraph explaining nearly his entire role. If I can, I'll try to add more to it, but I should probably sleep soon, seeing as how it's over midnight. I'll try to work on it tomorrow. Starry Parakarry